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listening report A journalist said that the team of Parma will fail,because his president had many financial problems.It sustained ten points of penalization,but their company submitted an appeal to recover the points.Although,his appeal was refused.Yesterday,they played against Naples,despite their problems,such as having no salary,they struggle the whole match.The team of Naples thought to beat them easily,but the match finished 2-2.At the end of the match the Naples' players tensed against the Parma's players,because they wanted win to entry in Champions League.Other teams gave to the club of Parma some subsidies to help,but it was not enough to save them.The federation club was straightforward,the club had to begin by the lowest category.

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Hi Antonio, 

 

Sel and I share the same sentiments - it is a good entry :) You might want to take note of spacing after each punctuation (i.e. after commas and full-stops), it makes it much easier for the reader. I've edited the passage as below based on my understanding of it, let me know what you think! 

 

A jouranlist said that the Team of Parma will fail, due to the many financial problems that their President is facing. The team had ten points deducted as a penalty, and their appeal to recover the points were rejected too. They played against Naples yesterday, despite their problems, such as having no salary. Although Team Naples were thought to surface as champions and Team Parma struggled through the whole game, the match finished 2-2. At the end of the match, the Naples' players tensed against Parma's players, because they wanted win to entry in Champions League. Other teams helped by giving some subsidies to Parma's club, but it was not enough to save them. The federation club was straightforward, and the club had to begin starting from the lowest category.

 

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I am learning English too, but i readed it, and i think it is good!

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