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Day 4 of learning english In sum, the most serious tsunami attacked in Indonesia that bring about more than thousand people died. We sum up all possible cause, effect and how to prevent it, in order to prevent the similarly situation in the future. Even we cannot predict immediately, we can find some possible solution and implement it. Some of people ignore the consequence of tsunami attacked, have no realize in this situation lead to the result unpredictably. Through this incident we can see lots of people lose their family, therefore, the government should take a steps to deal with this tragedy. Also some of countries should raise the awareness of preventing natural disaster.

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Day 4 of learning english

In sum, the most serious tsunami attack in Indonesia brought about more than thousand people's deaths. We should sum up all possible cause, effect and how to prevent it, in order to prevent the similarly situation in the future. Even if we cannot predict it immediately, we can find some possible solution and implement it. Some people ignore the consequence of tsunami attacks, have no idea that in this situation leads to the result unpredictably. Through this incident we can see lots of people lose their families, therefore, the government should take a steps to deal with this tragedy. Also some of countries should raise the awareness of preventing natural disaster.

 

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