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Do You Know What It Feels Like? Pieces…Thousand of pieces. This is what somebody can do with your heart, break it into many, many pieces. We do not expect such a painful hit, but, once we fall in love, everything may happen. You fall in love, for real, you trust that person and you are able to cross any border, to go through any obstacles that life puts between you two. You feel alive and you think that your life has a purpose now, you have a reason to live, because you have somebody to live with. Doesn’t it sound great? It feels like heaven until the entire sky falls on your head, because the break-up comes unexpectedly and, in that moment, you just can’t breathe… Because it hurts like hell.

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Do You Know What It Feels Like?

Pieces…Thousands of pieces. This is what somebody can do with your heart: break it into many, many pieces. We do not expect such a painful hit but, once we fall in love, everyanything may happen. You fall in love, for real, you trust that person, and you are able to cross any border, to go through any obstacles that life puts between you (two)*. You feel alive, and you think that your life has a purpose now, you have a reason to live, because you have somebody to live with*. Doesn’t it sound great? It feels like heaven, until the entire sky falls on your head, because the break-up comes unexpectedly and, in that moment, you just can’t breathe… because it hurts like hell.

*between you  or  between the two of you

*to live for  [?]

 

A very accomplished and sophisticated piece of writing !

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