Writing Practice

Please correct grammatical errors in follwing writing.
Thank you.

All of the words I put in the vocabulary list have been mentioned in the lecture. However I have not included it in the summary, because other information is more important and worth being stated. In addition, some words such as liberator were used as synonyms of a freedom fighter, such as liberator in the topic. Therefore, I put priority on using that general word and the words that have been mentioned more frequently during the lecture.

Writing Practice

Please correct gramatical errors in the following writing.
Thank you,

All of the words I put in the vocabulary list have been were mentioned in the lecture. But I have not included them in the summary, because other information are is more important and worth being stated. In addition, some words, such as liberator, was were used as synonyms of freedom fighter in the topic. Therefore, I put priority on using general words and the words that have been were mentioned more frequently during the lecture.

As the lecture is finished and in finished time I would be tempted to use the past simple passive rather than the present perfect passive. Apart from that it is generally fine. Just one little point of grammar if you are including an example then it is usually between commas as highlighted in the text.

Hope this helps.

Writing Practice

Please correct my grammatical errors in the following writing.
Thank you,

All (of) the words I included (put) in the vocabulary list have been mentioned in the lecture (.) but I have not included in the summary, because other information was considered (are) more important for inclusion. (and worth being stated.) I have included (In addition,) some words, such as liberator which is a (was used as) synonym for (of) freedom fighter, in the list. (topic.) I have, therefore, prioritised documenting (I put priority on using the general word and) the words that have been mentioned more frequently during the lecture.

I have suggested a few corrections, Satomi, which I hope will prove helpful.