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History and its movement
This year I graduate from the University. (A little more natural to say it this way, although using I'll is pretty much okay as well, don't use "the" here though)
It's a little bit sad.
I'll be missing miss my classmates. (We don't very often say "be missing", although it is used in one very uncommon context)
I can't say that I like my major, but it gave me a lot of knowledges, for sure. (Great sentance! :) )
I've been learning history.
The historical education gives you a critical thinking skills and the ability to find the truth among the fake informations. (Information is already plural - I'd probably also phrase this last part like "And the ability to find the truth among the false infomation" just as I think the meaning is clearer, but it was completely fine the way you put it.)
You can predict what will happen tomorrow because, you know, history is like a spiral. (Love this! :D)
All events are, and will be, repeating and repeating. (Just some punctuation needed)
Of course, the different civiliations has the have different people, the different reachments and devepolments. (No need for definite article in most of this and not sure what the word in orange is supposed to be.
But all of them has have the same steps; to be born, to grow and to die.
There are many viewpoint on this.
Some people say that history is not a spiral. Maybe it is. But I read a lot of books, historical documents like The Magna Carta, The Universal Declaration of Human Rights, The Russian truth and other diifferent resolutions, manifests (manifestos ?) etc.
I can't say that it was interesting and I read all pages, but those documents are helpful to look at the diynamics of the society. (Simple spelling mistake :) )
You know, there happened a lot of wars and rebellions happened.
Most of them have the same similar reasons. (Again here, I've edited it to sound more natural, I don't think a native would say "Most have the same reasons" unless they misspoke)
The peasants became angry because of taxes and no payment, so they have had to rebel.
Later on other people came to power and after some years or centuries the peasants or maybe it's not peasants, it's already another class which who were named workers or proletarians. (Awesome long sentance here!)
(it doesn't matter how what we call them) have to rebel again.
History is boring in that point.
People do make the same mistakes. (Again just to sound natural)
I want to say that there were no bad guys in history.
They can be bad from points like humanity, but from hitstorical points they're not bad because history was needed them. (Okay, this is a difficult sentance hehe. I will write this the way I think you meant it>
They could be considered "bad" from a human point of view, but they aren't bad as we can learn from their history. (I'm not sure I understand your meaning in this one entirely but we can discuss it if you like!)
For example, there were a lot of killers or and thiefs thieves who that expolred the American continent.
They were bad guys, but they helped history to make another one step forward. (Now I think I understand your meaning! :), not sure it applies to mass murdering dictators though! Hehehe )
I advise you to read "Ten Historical Miniatures" by Stefan Zweig. (I'd simply phrase it as "I recommend" instead of "I advise you to read", it sounds overlly formal and something maybe a teacher would say to a student as opposed to friendly advice.)
I don't want to learn history in the future, I'm going to change my major.
But you know, I couldn't help telling you that I'm glad and I'm thankful to my teachers.
Awesome work dude. I hope one day I am as good at Russian as you are at English. All perfectly understandable, apart from a couple of very small parts! Great stuff! :)
History and its movement
This year I'll graduate from the University. It's a little bit sad. I will miss my classmates. I can't say that I like my major, but it has definitely given me a lot of knowledge. I've been learning history. The historical education helps you with critical thinking and the ability to find the truth amongst ficticious information. You can predict what will happen tomorrow because, you know, history is like a spiral. All events are and will repeating again and again. Of course, the different civiliations have different people, the different reachments and devepolments. But all of them have the same steps being born, to grow and to die. There many viewpoints on this. Some people say that history is not a spiral. Maybe it is. But I read a lot of books, historical documents like the Magna Carta, The Universal Declaration of Human Rights, The Russian truth and other diifferent resolutions, manifests etc. I can't say that it was interesting and I read all pages, but those documents are helpful to look at the dynamics of the society. You know, there have been a lot of wars and rebellions. Most of them for the same reasons. The peasants became angry because of taxes and no payment, so they had to rebel. Later on other people came to power and after some years or centuries the peasants or maybe it's not peasants, it's already another class which named workers or proletarians (it doesn't matter how we call them) have to rebel again. History is boring in that point. People do the same mistakes. I want to say that there were no bad guys in history. They can be bad from points like humanity, but from historical points they're not bad because history needed them. For example, there were a lot of killers or thiefs who explored the American continent. They were bad guys, but they helped history to make another one step forward. I advise you to read "Ten Historical Miniatures" by Stefan Zweig. I don't want to learn history in the future, I'm going to change my major. But you know, I couldn't help telling I'm glad and I'm thankful to my teachers.
History and its movement
This year I'll graduate from college. I feel a little bit sad. I'll be missing my classmates. I can't say that I like my major, but I did learn a lot, for sure. I've been learning history. The Historical education develops critical thinking and the ability to discern the truth among the false informations. You can predict what will happen tomorrow because, you know, history is like a spiral-->>(circle?). All events are, and will be, repeating and repeating. Of course, the different civilizations have the different people, the different reachments?--(what is the русский worrd for this?) and developments. But all of them have the same stages of life: to be born, to grow, and to die. There many viewpoints on this. Some people say that history is not a spiral. Maybe it is (a common way to say this might be: "Maybe it is, maybe it isn't"). But I read a lot of books, historical documents like Magna Carta, The Universal Declaration of Human Rights, The Russian Truth, and other diifferent resolutions, manifests, etc. I can't say that it was interesting and I read all of the pages, but those documents are helpful in seeing at the dynamics of the-->>(the use of the word "the" here depends on the use of society. If you mean each document describes one individual civilization's society, then you would use "the" here like you have it. If you mean all of the documents help you to see the dynamics of the whole world's society, you would leave out "the" and just say "...dynamics of society.") society. You know, there have been a lot of wars and rebellions. Most of them are caused by the same reasons. The peasants became angry because of taxes and no payment-->>(either "not enough money to pay them" or "not making enough money", depending on what you mean to convey), so they had to rebel. Later on other people came to power, and after some years or centuries the peasants (or maybe it's not peasants, it's already another class which called workers or proletarians--it doesn't matter what we call them) have to rebel again. History is boring in that point way. People do make the same mistakes. I want to say that there were no bad guys in history. They can be bad from in points like humanity, but from historical points they're were (this change was to keep them in past tense) not bad because history was needed them. For example, there were a lot of killers or thiefs who explored the American continent. They were bad guys, but they helped history to take another one step forward. I advise you to read-->>(a better way to say this might be "I recommend reading") "Ten Historical Miniatures" by Stefan Zweig. I don't want to learn study history in the future; I'm going to change my major. But you know, I couldn't help telling my teachers I'm glad and I'm thankful for them and what they taught me.
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