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essay part 2 Third, the last quote is really relevant because it introduces my next point. Many of the black people live in miserable condition. They don’t have running water, electricity, proper road and an easy access to their school. They have to walk five kilometers to go to school and they have to walk a long distance to bring clean water at home. According to an article in the Washington post, the rate of unemployment is always around of twenty-five percent. Meanwhile, white people live like a north American. I mean they all have a cellphone, they use computers, laptops and they get all the essential services like electricity and running water in their house. Their house are very close to their school. The gap between black and white is very big. To conclude, the three reasons why I think the apartheid in South Africa is still a current are: the limit access to the education for the black people, the corruption in South Africa is rampant and their miserable conditions of living. I think it will getting worst because the government is very corrupted and it will revoke some rights from the black people. It is very sad because many people fought all their life for the freedom and the liberty and it is coming like it was before

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Third, the last quote is really relevant because it introduces my next point. Many of the black people live in miserable conditions. They don’t have running water, electricity, proper roads, or easy access to their schools. They have to walk five kilometers to go to school and they have to walk a long distance to bring clean water to their homes. According to an article in the Washington post, the rate of unemployment is always around of twenty-five percent. Meanwhile, white people live like a North Americans. I mean They all have a cellphones, they use computers, and laptops, and they get all the essential services like electricity and running water in their houses. Their houses are very close to their schools. The gap between black and white is very big.

To conclude, the three reasons why I think the apartheid in South Africa is still a current are: the limited access to the education for the black people, the rampant corruption, in South Africa is rampant and their miserable living conditions of living. I think it will getting worse because the government is very corrupt and it will revoke some rights from the black people. It is very sad because many people fought all their lives for the freedom and the liberty and it is becoming like it was before.

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