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email FCE Hi Alex, Thank you so much for telling me about the concert. Yes, of course, I'd like to go to the concert with you! On one side, you asked me about the band: they are from London, and they play different kind of music. The band plays since 90s and three of their singles were on the top of the hits on the radio (listas de éxito). I recommend you listen to last cd, it is the best for me, voices and instruments mix sound excellent for me. On the other side, in my view, it'd be better we were standing, so we could dance and be nearer to them, we could hear them better and heavier. At last, next day I'd like to go to my favourite park in your city, there are a lot of wonderful plants and flowers there, I enjoy there very much. After we'll have walked around the park, we could go to have lunch. Do you like my idea, or do you prefer to do something different? I'm looking forward to meeting to you at the concert, I wish time flew! Take care, Anna.

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email FCE

Hi Alex,


Thank you so much for telling me about the concert. Yes, of course, I'd like to go to the concert with you! 

You asked me about the band: they are from London, and they play different kinds of music. The band has played together since the 90s and three of their singles were on the top of the hits on the radio (listas de éxito). I recommend that you listen to the last cd, it is the best one in my opinion, the voices and instruments mix sound excellent for me to me or in my opinion.
 
With regard to where we should sit, it'd be better if we were standing, so we could dance and be nearer to them, we could hear them better and heavier.

At last prefiero Finally or after that, the next day I'd like to go to my favourite park in your city, there are a lot of wonderful plants and flowers there, I enjoy there prefiero that place very much. After that we'll have walked around the park, we could go to have lunch. Do you like my idea, or do you prefer to do something different?

I'm looking forward to meeting to you at the concert, I wish time flew!


Take care,


Anna.

On one side...on the other side en ingles es on (the) one hand, but on the other hand y se usa así:

On the one hand, I like the songs this band plays; on the other hand, the lead vocalist has a bad voice.

Time flies es un refrane pero no he escuchado "I wish time flew" es correcto pero raro. I wish time would go by more quickly. Quizás alguien dirá que está bien.

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email FCE

Hi Alex,

Thank you so much for telling me about the concert. Yes, of course, I'd like to go to the concert with you!

To answer your first question about the band: they are from London and they play different kinds of music. The band plays post-90s music and three of their singles were on the top of the hits on the radio (listas de éxito). I recommend you listen to last CD, it's my favorite. The mix of voices and instruments sounds excellent for me.

Regarding your second question, in my view, it'd be better we were standing. That way, we could dance, be nearer to them, and hear them better and heavier.

And lastly, the next day I'd like to go to my favourite park in your city. There are a lot of wonderful plants and flowers there. I really enjoy going there very much. After we'll have walked we walk around the park, we could go to have lunch. Do you like my idea, or do you prefer to do something different?

I'm looking forward to meeting to you at the concert, I wish time flew!


Take care,


Anna.

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