雨太多了！

今星期有雨太多了。我不会懂！我在花园得作工作，可是我不会因为这个雨。我的朋友快要有生日了，可是生日事在户外。太麻烦了！

hi,Joseph,your chinese is ok,we get what you are trying to say, but a lot of work is needed if you want to write an well-organised chinese email( or something like that) in which you can express yourself correctly in a reading-friendly way.

we use "这星期" instead of"今星期"when we want to say "this week". 

we don't use "今" a lot, except in the phrase"今天"which means"today".

"做"and “作” can be very confusing even for native mandarin speakers. we have spent a lot of time figuring out their differences in  language classes (a nightmare for most chinese students).

"做"is generally used as a verb, while "作" is used to form  phrases(this phrase is always a noun)such as "作业"“作品”“工作”. so in "我在花园得作工作" the first"作"should be replaced by "做"。

"工作"is a phrase highly recommended to remeber if you want to work in china, because it is the mandarin version of"job". 

another very very important word is"是" which means"am""is""are"was""were"...... yes, in chinese they are the same word"是".

i am a teacher.

我是一名教师。

we are good friends.

我们是好朋友。

she is a painter.

她是一个画家。

i was a teacher.

我曾经是一名老师。

they were the greatest actors at that time.

他们是当时最好的演员。

so in the sentence"生日事在户外",it should be"生日是在户外"。

The following is my version , I hope it could help! By the way,my name is eileen, leave me a message if you need ANY help with your mandarin.

这星期雨太多了，真不明白为什么！花园里有很多事等着我去做呢，我不能因为下雨而耽误了。而且，我有个朋友快要过生日了，生日会在户外举办。下雨真是太麻烦了！

There is  lots of rain this week , why! I have a lot of work to do in the garden which i can't put off even though it is raining all the time. what is worse , my friend's birthday is coming, he/she plans to hold a birthday party in the outdoor on that day, what if it rains then. what a mess!

雨太多了！

今这星期有的雨太多了。我不会懂明白！我在花园得作做工作，可是我不会因为这个雨就停止工作。我的朋友快要有过生日了，可是生日事是在户外过。太麻烦了！

你们觉得我写中文写的好还是不好？我知道我得练习，可是我不知道怎么练。我应该练习写和说话怎么？你们觉得什么该怎么练？

多写多说就好了    多和一些中国人交流  慢慢的就会提高

雨太多了！

这个今星期有雨下的太多了。我不明白为什么会懂！我在花园得作工作我本来得在花园干活，可是我不会因为下这个雨我不能干了。我的朋友快要过有生日了，可是生日聚会是事在户外。太麻烦了！

你们觉得我写中文写的好还是不好？我知道我得练习，可是我不知道该怎么练习。我应该练习写和说话怎么？你们觉得呢什么？