Strange noises.
Today, I was at home studying English when I heard a strong noise. I was scared. I looked through the window, but there was nothing. I went into the kitchen, but everything was ok. I went to the bathroom, and there wasn't anything strange. Then, I heard people talking in the street. I went downstairs quickly, and I arrived to the street. In front there was nothing, but in the corner, a lot of people assembled. I approached them and when I arrived, I understood the noise: There was a tree fallen into the ground.
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Strange Noises
Today, I was at home studying English when I heard a strong loud noise. I was scared. I looked through the window, but there was nothing there. I went into the kitchen, but everything was ok. I went to the bathroom, and there wasn't anything strange there either. Then, I heard people talking in the street. I went downstairs quickly, and when I arrived to the street I initially saw nothing. In front there was nothing, but in on the corner, a lot of people were assembled. I approached them and the I realized what the loud noise was, when I arrived, I understood the noise: There was a tree fallen. into the ground.
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Strange noises.
Today, I was at home studying English I was studying English at home when I heard loud banging noise. I was scared And I looked through out the window, but there was nothing. I went into the kitchen, but everything was ok. I went to the bathroom, and there wasn't anything strange. Then, I heard people talking in the street. I went downstairs quickly, and I arrived to the street. In front there was nothing, but in the corner, a lot of people assembled. I approached them and when I arrived, I understood the noise: There was a tree fallen into the ground.
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Strange noises.
Today, I was at home studying English when I heard a strong loud noise. I was scared. I looked through the window, but there was nothing. I went into the kitchen, but everything was ok. I went to the bathroom, and there wasn't anything strange.
Then I heard people talking in the street. I went downstairs quickly, and I went outside to the street. In front there was nothing, but in the corner, a lot of people had assembled. I approached them and when I arrived, I understood the noise: There was a tree which had fallen into the ground.
Nice short story Marta,
1. We talk about a loud noise (like a 'bang')
2. You are telling the story in the past so any actions that happened before that time (past past) is written in the past perfect - a lot of people had assembled, a tree had fallen
Apart from that it was perfect!
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