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Do you love making lists? I really need to make list of everything: I have list of the movies or series I want to watch, the groceries I need to buy, the places I would live to travel to and, of course, of the things I want to accomplish to make my proffesional dreams come true, including my blog. When I was younger I was able to remember absolute everything. Do you remember when you collected trading card and you were able to tell if you had one or not just with looking at it? And then you did feel sorry for your parents because they had to look at a list to know it. Well, I suppose I am the mother now because I need to have everything written. I use the Bullet Journal system for this because I love hand writting.

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Do you love making lists?

I really need to make lists of everything: I have a list of the movies or series I want to watch, the groceries I need to buy, the places I would live like / love to travel to and, of course, of the things I want to accomplish to make my professional dreams come true, including my blog.
When I was younger I was able to remember absolutely everything. Do you remember when you collected trading cards and you were able to tell if you had one or not just with by looking at it? And then you did would feel sorry for your parents because they had to look at a list to know it. Well, I suppose I am the mother now because I need to have everything written down.
I use the Bullet Journal system for this because I love hand writing.

 

Very good. My corrections are in red and my suggestions to sound more natural are in blue/grey.

Or perhaps i should say:

[1]  Very good.

[2]  My corrections are in red.

[3]  My suggestions to sound more natural are in blue/grey.

 ;-)


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Do you love making lists?

I really need to make list of everything: I have list of the movies or series I want to watch, the groceriies I need to buy, the places I would like to visit (sueno mejor) and, of course, the things I want to accomplish to make my professional dreams come true, including my blog.


When I was younger, I was able to remember absolutlely everything. Do you remember when you collected trading cards and you were able to tell if you had one or not just by looking at it, and then you felt sorry for your parents because they had to look at a list to know it.

Well, I suppose I am the mother now because I need to have everything written down.
I use the Bullet Journal system for this, because I love handwriting.

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