To help others

I had studied English,Russian and Korean only but I insist on persisted in/continued learning Englishbecause I like English the most.others just like I had never studied.I like to listen to other people, especially native English speakers speak English. It is so pleasant to hear! I also like speaking English,but not good but I cannot speak it well/fluently.Once, I communicated with two foreigners in English and helped them find the bank.then I I then had a sense of accomplishment because I can could (past tense) help people by speaking English.  This is why so I want to improve my English.

Some things you need to watch out for are your spacing and punctuation. There should be no space between the last word and punctuation, and one space after the punctuation, like in this sentence.

Another issue I noticed in your writing is that you frequently use run-on sentences. This is a sentence that is very long and unnecessarily complex, and can confuse the reader. This can be easily fixed by breaking up your sentences into smaller ones by using periods. Otherwise, well done!

If you don't understand my points or want me to explain it another way, please let me know!