geuna park's notebook entry: Feb 04, 2011
In these days, I want to buy a Polaroid instant camera.
My hooby is photography.
My school starts next month.
The whole school will be covered with cherry blossoms in April.
That is a perfect spot for a picture.
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geuna park's notebook entry: Feb 04, 2011
Sometime soon, I want to buy a Polaroid instant camera.In these days sounds a very strange way to start a sentence. Better to forget this phrase - we really don;t use it - and find better options.
My hobby is photography. My school starts next month, and the whole school will be covered with cherry blossoms in April. That would be a perfect spot for a picture.
Will be sounds very definite. This is your opinion/imagination, so use the possible would be.
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geuna park's notebook entry: Feb 04, 2011
My school starts next month. Since Photography is my hobby, I want to buy a Polaroid instant camera one of these days. My whole school will be covered with cherry blossoms this April. It will be perfect for picture taking.Want to progress faster?
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