Bonsoir Jamie!

May I?

My Vacation <-( Title Case)

My two-week vacation <--(Phrasing it this way is just better.) in Spain was<-(Even though the vacation's duration lasted two weeks, it's still one vacation) great!<-(The exclamation point comes right after the last letter of the sentence. Please avoid putting a space before it.) I'm happy, I had time for my daugther and myself. We were lucky it was sunny. Swimming and watching the sea were relaxing. I didn't want to come back to France. Now, all I see is rain!

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Bienvenue, c'est bien ecrit. Here are some changes:

My 2 week-long vacation in Spain were was great! I'm happy I had time for me myself and my daugther only. We were Lucky lucky it was sunny. Swimming and watching the sea was relaxing. I didn't want to come back return to France, and now, all what that I see is the rain!