Like or Dislike change

Task2
Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both their views and give your own opinions
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My writing:
Some people like to spend their lives doing the same things while others love to have changes in their lives. Both views have their advantages and disadvantages.
For the people who don’t like change, they can focus on special areas for a long time. By doing so, they can accumulate their knowledge and experiences in a particular field. Furthermore, they generally form a stable social group/circle, which benefits not only their career but also their daily life. However, they might miss some chances to know other things which could be more suitable for them.
For the people who think charge is a good thing, they can try many new things and compare them to find which is their best love. There are lots of examples of people who changed their careers or choices many times before they finally became very successful talents. At the same time, too many changes have some adverse impact for them, because they are always novices when they jump into a different field.
As far as I am concerned, changing the things you are doing has different effects for different people. It is necessary for people who are doing some creative jobs. Change means something new or creativity. However, for the people who like stable social environments and doing jobs needing longtime research and practice, focus would be much more significant in their life.
In conclusion, our society needs different types of attitudes towards to change, since the society itself varies a great deal.

[Very good]