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Motivation Letter Hello all english native speakers! I am a Peruvian university student and I am currently applying to do an international exchange in the USA at Oklahoma State University. I was told to write a motivation letter so I tried my best to express my motivations in this letter. I would like you to correct the mistakes I may have in this writing and maybe some comments on this letter, I would really appreciate your help. Here is my Motivation Letter: Diego Recabarren 2311 La molina avenue Lima, Peru To whom it may concern, I am Diego Recabarren, student of Civil Engineering Faculty at Universidad Peruana de Ciencias Aplicadas in Peru. With this letter I would like to express my strong interest to participate at your Student Exchange Program in the fall of 2015. There are many reasons that make me want to study at Oklahoma State University. First of all, I always wanted to study abroad to expand my horizons by pursuing an international career, so this program will really mean a lot to me to explore and achieve my professional aspirations. Second, I would like to explore a completely new way of life. I want to enrich my international culture by studying and interacting with others international students as well as local students, which I strongly believe will make me broaden my horizons and enjoy different cultures from mine. Furthermore, I would like to build true and great friendships with people who have a completely different culture and expand my life’s perspective. Studying at Oklahoma State University seems like the perfect opportunity to experience other educational system and enrich my knowledge as a future professional. Last but not least, this exchange will give me the opportunity to know Oklahoma state and enjoy different attractions in the beautiful city of Stillwater. I would like to visit as many places as I can like for example The Sheerar Museum of Stillwater History or the Boomer Lake. I am confident that I will complete my academic and personal goals with all my enthusiasm. Thank you for considering my request and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Sincerely, Diego Recabarren Jimenez

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To whom it may concern, 


I am Diego Recabarren, student of Civil Engineering Faculty at Universidad Peruana de Ciencias Aplicadas in Peru. With this letter I would like to express my strong interest in participating in your Student Exchange Program in the fall of 2015.

There are many reasons that make me want to study at Oklahoma State University. First of all, I always wanted to study abroad to expand my horizons by pursuing an international career, so this program will really mean a lot to me to explore and achieve my professional aspirations.


Second, I would like to explore a completely new way of life. I want to enrich my international culture by studying and interacting with other international students as well as local students, which I strongly believe will make me broaden my horizons and help me enjoy different cultures from mine.

Furthermore, I would like to build true and great friendships with people who have a completely different culture and expand my life’s perspective. Studying at Oklahoma State University seems like the perfect opportunity to experience another educational system and enrich my knowledge as a future professional.

Last but not least, this exchange will give me the opportunity to know Oklahoma state and enjoy different attractions in the beautiful city of Stillwater. I would like to visit as many places as I can, like for example The Sheerar Museum of Stillwater History or the Boomer Lake.

I am confident that I will complete my academic and personal goals with all my enthusiasm. Thank you for considering my request and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely,
Diego Recabarren Jimenez

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