about me
I'm maria, i'm twenty nine years old, i'm from venezuela. my carrer is business manager and i have two years degree. i'm married with the excelent person. my husband is disigner and he has twenty nine years old too.
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about me
I'm maria, I'm twenty nine years old, I'm from venezuela. My carrer is business manager and I have two years degree (???). I'm married with an excelent person. My husband is designer and he is twenty nine years old too.
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About me
I'm Maria, I'm twenty nine years old, I'm from Venezuela. I work as a business manager and I have a two year degree. I'm married to an excellent person. My husband is a designer and he is twenty nine (years old) too.
Hello Maria,
A nice introductory text there are some mistakes but I can understand everything.
1. When we are writing we always use a capital(big) 'I', when we are talking about me.
2. When we are talking about jobs we say 'I am a/I work as a'.
3. Similar to Spanish, we use a/an when we are not concrete, a/an = 1 (of many). So your husband is an excellent person because there are many excellent people in the world.
Well done!
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about me
Hello I'm maria and I'm twenty nine years old. I'm from venezuela. My career is in business managment and I have a two year degree. I'm currently married to an excellent person. My husband is a designer and he is twenty nine years old as well.
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