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Today I wear..... I bought a t-shirt 2 days ago. I didn't care so much about what was written on the shirt. Today, because I gotta get a ticket for Osaka, I was riding on my bicycle. Then, a girl came from my decision. And she opened her mouth and said "Let's see!" in English. I was like "what is she talking about?! And why she speaks English in Japan?!" Then I realized that there is two words on my T-shirt, "LET SEE." I was surprised and noticed why the girl said to me "let's see." (She correct English on the shirt. Sometimes, there are weird logo on the Japanese t-shirts. Those are futile some time, but those can be funny things sometimes. On my old shirt, there are two words ,"good lack."

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I bought a t-shirt 2 days ago. I didn't care so much about what was written on the shirt.
Today, because I had to get a ticket for Osaka, I was riding on my bicycle. Then, a girl came from my decision [THIS IS WRONG, BUT I AM NOT SURE WHAT YOU MEAN; DO YOU MEAN, "BECAUSE OF THIS I MET A GIRL"?]. And she opened her mouth and said "Let's see!" in English. I was like, "what is she talking about?! And why is she speaking English in Japan?!" Then I realized that there are two words on my T-shirt, "LET SEE." I was surprised and realized why the girl said to me "let's see." (She was correcting the English on the shirt.) 
Sometimes, there are weird logos on Japanese t-shirts. They are wrong sometimes, but those can be funny. On my old shirt, there are two words ,"good lack."

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My correction is below. You are doing well. The English is understandable, and you used the idiom "I was like", correctly, which made your writing fun to read. You need to watch out for plural and singular nouns. Also, a few places you needed to use "-ing" verb endings, instead of simple present ( "speaking" sounds better than "speaks" because she might have continued speaking in English... so you use "continuing time" verb form.)

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