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Comfortable life
Young people should not live Comfortablely. As Chinese saying goes“One propers in worries and hardship,and perishes in ease and comfort”.Comfortable life makes people easy to settle with what they own currently instead of making effort to pursuing their dreams. In my opinion,young people should push themselves past their comfort zone and try to experience more frustration,struggle,setbacks and failures. If the young withstand these hits they would be able to take handle any difficulties which they meet in life and career in their strive. In recent years,more and more young people live off their parents. They depend on the aged too much!Don't they think it is absolute for them to create what they need through their hard working?
The use of "their" indicates whose comfort zone you are talking about. Experience was used correctly, just a minor spelling mistake.
Replacing "take" with "handle" gives a more defined meaning to the sentence.
Other than that it was very good from what I can see. Keep up the good work! :)
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