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Please rivise my writing :My future plans ''It does not matter where you are coming from. All that matter is where you are going'' . Everyone should have their own plans to be successful and I am no exception. The first thing I want to do is becoming a student of University of Social sciences and humanities. The second is trying my best to study in order to obtain a scholarship,so that I can have an opportunity to study abroad. It's certainly a long and hard road to make this dream come to,but I believe in myself that I can actualize it soon. The last is becoming a professional interpreter. As an interpreter I can not only travel all over the world, explore the cultures of other countries but also have high salary and gain more experience. In brief, I am making every effort to accomplish all my plans.

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Please *rivise my writing :My Future Plans

''It does not matter where you are coming from. All that matter* is where you are going'' . Everyone should have their own plans to be successful, and I am no exception. The first thing I want to do is *becoming a student of the University of Social Sciences and Humanities. The second is *trying my best to study in order to obtain a scholarship, so that I (can) have an opportunity to study abroad. It's certainly a long and hard road to make this dream come to*, but I believe in myself, and that I can *actualize it soon. The last is *becoming a professional interpreter. As an interpreter I can not only travel all over the world, explore the cultures of other countries, but also have a high salary, and gain (more) experience. (In brief,) I am making every effort to accomplish all my plans.

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All that matters

to become

to try my best

make this dream come true

make it happen

to become

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Please rivise my writing :My future plans

''It does not matter where you are coming from. All that matter is where you are going'' . Everyone should have their own plans to be successful and I am no exception. The first thing I want to do is to become a student at the University of Social sciences and humanities. The second is to try my best to study in order to obtain a scholarship so that I can have an opportunity to study abroad. It's certainly a long and hard road to make this dream come true,but I believe in myself that I can actualize it soon. The last thing is to a professional interpreter. As an interpreter I will not only travel all over the world, exploring the cultures of other countries, but also have a high salary and gain more experience. In brief, I am making every effort to accomplish all my plans.

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