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Comparing pictures (I accept advices) My name is Fernando and I am going to talk about money. Both pictures are related with/ are about money but in a very different way. In the first picture we can see a man who is attracting with a magnetic a large sum of money whereas the 2nd picture is showing a group of kids who are suffering the lack of resources. On the one hand the man seems to represent the first world where all you need can be bought by money, things such as health services, security, meals, etc but on the other hand it is represented less developed (underdeveloped) countries where people is so poor that they don’t have access to human rights such as education, health service. I’m sure that these children are suffering diseases and infections such as diarrheal due to the lack of drinking water, medicines, etc. This picture makes me feel sad it shows the contrast between both worlds, developed countries not only don’t avoid the famine, wars, deforestation in poor countries but also spoilt their nature resources. With regard to the second question personally I think that people is changing their minds about this problem although sometimes is difficult to take actions in our messy and hectic world. I know many people including my wife who have sponsored children in need, older people who have donated a lot of money to charity, I know people who is enrolled in ONG such as save children, red crossed. This people is doing a fantastic labour in these countries, carrying medicines, tools to drill wells, working as volunteers at hospitals, schools, etc.

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My name is Fernando and I am going to talk about money.
Both pictures *are related to/ are about money but in a very different way. In the first picture we can see a man who is using/holding a magnet to attract (sounds more natural) a large sum of money whereas the 2nd picture is showing/shows a group of kids/children who are suffering from a lack of resources.
In the first picture the man seems to represent the developed world where all you need can be bought with money, things such as health services, security, meals, etc. The other picture represents the **less developed (underdeveloped) countries where people are so poor that they don’t have access to basic human rights such as education or a health service. I’m sure that these children ***are suffering from diseases and infections such as diarrhoea due to the lack of drinking water and medicines, etc.
This picture makes me feel sad it shows the contrast between both worlds, developed countries do not suffer from things such as  famine, war, deforestation like people do in in poor countries. Some developed countries spoil many natural resources that less developed countries have.

With regard to the second question personally I think that people are changing their minds about this problem although sometimes is difficult to take actions in our messy and hectic world. I know many people including my wife who have sponsored children in need, older people who have donated a lot of money to charity, I know people who are enrolled in ONG such as Save the children and the Red Cross. These people are doing a fantastic job in these countries, providing medicines, tools to drill for wells, working as volunteers in hospitals, schools, etc.

 

A good subject and well written. The blue are not coorections i just think it sounds more natural like this.

 

* ''Are related to/ Are about'' = Both correct.

**  ''Lest developed countries'' You can also say ''Third world countries''

*** ''I’m sure that these children are suffering from''  

You could also say ''I am sure that these children must be suffering from ...'' Like ''Deben de sufrir de''

 

Kind regards 

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Comparing pictures (I accept advices)

My name is Fernando and I am going to talk about money.
Both pictures are related with/ are about relate to money but in a very different way. In the first picture we can see a man who is attracting with a magnetic a large sum of money whereas the 2nd picture is showing shows a group of kids who are suffering the from a lack of resources.
On the one hand the man seems to represent the first world where all you need can be bought by withmoney, things such as health services, security, meals, etc but on the other hand it is represented less developed (underdeveloped) countries are represented where people is are so poor that they don’t have access to human rights such as education, health service. I’m sure that these children are suffering diseases and infections such as diarrheal diarrhea due to the lack of drinking water, medicines, etc.
This picture makes me feel sad as itshows the contrast between both worlds, developed countries not only don’t avoid the famine, wars, deforestation in poor countries but also spoilt their nature resources.

With regard to the second question personally I think that people is are changing their minds about this problem although sometimes it is difficult to (take actions) (make a difference) in our messy and hectic world. I know many people including my wife who have sponsored children in need, older people who have donated a lot of money to charity, I know people who is enrolled in ONG such as save children, red crossed are members of NGOs such as Save the Children, Red Cross. This people isThese people are doing a fantastic labour great work in these countries, carrying medicines, tools to drill wells, working as volunteers at hospitals, schools, etc.

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