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The real man. Today I was in a store and that is what happened. A 6-7 year old boy was counting his money, then he gave it to a seller hesitantly. He asked for one sausage (or two if there's enough money). Unkind seller gave it to him muttering something and then the boy left that store. I left just after him. This boy was feeding two homeless kittens. Well...He is the real man.

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The real man.

Today I was in a store and that is what happened. A 6-7 year old boy was counting his money, then he gave it to a seller hesitantly.

He asked for a  sausage (or two if  he had  enough money).The unkind seller gave it to him muttering something and then the boy left that store. I left just after him. This boy was feeding two homeless kittens. Well...He is the real man.

 

What a heart warming story! Is it true?

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Did you actually see this? What a sweet boy!
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The real man.

Today I was in a store and that is what happened. A 6-7 year old boy was counting his money, then he gave it to a seller hesitantly.

He asked for a sausage (or two if he had enough money). The unkind seller gave it to him muttering something and then the boy left that store. I left just after him. This boy was feeding two homeless kittens. Well...He is a real man.

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Everything is basically perfect! Though, what might sound better is "he is a real man" instead of "he is the real man".

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