help me please

I have translated a text from Spanish to English, but I don't really know if I have (any) mistakes. Please help me.

Hello, my name is Orlando Ortega Galicio. I am a teacher and the head of laboratories (laboratory head) at The Southern Cone National University of Tehcnology in Lima, Peru (www.untecs.com).
Allow me to congratulate you on your presentation held at the INICTEL facilities, which I was able to attend and observe. I am aware that your company, FIBERHOME, has set up a cable manufacturing plant and optical fiber in Ecuador. In fact, our University of Technology has an area of concentration in Telecommunications Engineering, and for that reason we would like to strengthen bonds with you in order to have (or create, build, form, etc.) a close fellowship in academic, scientific and technological fields related to optical communications.

help me please

I have translated a text from Spanish to English but i don't really know if i have mistakes, please help me.

Hello my name is Orlando Ortega Galicio. I am a teacher and the head of laboratories at Southern Cone National University of Tehcnology Lima – Peru (www.untecs.com).
Let me congratulate you on your presentation which was held in the INICTEL facilities, which I was able to attend and observe.
I have knowledge of your company FIBERHOME has set up a cable manufacturing plant and optical fiber in Ecuador. On the other hand, our University of Technology has the career of Telecommunications engineering, for that reason, we would like to strengthen bonds with you in order to have a close fellowship in the academic, scientific and technological field related to optical communications.