Suicide in the subway
In the subway of my city 4 people this month have committed suicide. For that reason, the service in this mean of transport has collapsed frequently in the last days. Many people that was traveling in the subway has have to leave it and later to take a taxi or bus to arrive to work. However, for leave the station first it's necessary stand in a long queue thirty minutes or sometimes more. When it happens a part of the city becomes in chaos.
If i'ts true that a suicide in the subway is a big problem, I have other questions: Why a person take his own live?.
What think the suicidal's family after that?. That person sometime searched for help?. We can't be indifferents, the actual rate of suicides in the world is not normal. What happens?. How we cant to help to stop it?.
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Suicide in the subway
In the subway of my city 4 people this month have committed suicide. For that reason, the service in this means of transport has collapsed frequently in the past (or last) few days. Many people that were traveling in the subway have had to leave it and later to take a taxi or bus to arrive to work. However, before you can leave the station, it's necessary stand in a long queue thirty minutes or sometimes more. When it happens that part of the city becomes chaotic*.
If it's true that a suicide in the subway is a big problem, then I have a question: Why would a person take his own life?.
What does the family of the person who committed suicide think after that?. Do they wonder if the person sometime searched for help? We can't be indifferent, the actual rate of suicide in the world is not normal. What happens? How can we help to stop it?
Well written text about a sad situation. Remember that you don't need to put a period after a question mark. I am guessing that you are in Medellin? I remember that there is a subway system there.
* you could also say "erupts into chaos"
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It happened to me, once time in my life and i did'nt forget this moment. When it happened, I thank the train rolled on a peace of wood or something like that. I realized few minutes after, that the train didn't follow its "road" ont he railway. I decided to move the train and go at work by walk. I didn't' wanted to see anything.
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Suicide in the subway
In the subway of my city 4 people this month have committed suicide. (Four people have committed suicide in my city's subway this month. - Mejor traducción) For that reason, the service in this mean of transport this mode of transportation has collapsed frequently in the last over the past few days. Many people that was were traveling in the subway hashave have had to leave stop using (or taking) it and later to take a taxi or bus to arrive to work. However, for leave the station first it's necessary stand in a long queue thirty minutes or sometimes more. When it happens a part of the city becomes in chaos. (In order to leave the station, you have to stand in a long line for thirty minutes or sometimes longer. When this happens, part of the city becomes chaotic)
If i'ts it's true that a suicide in the subway is a big problem, then I have some other questions: Why would a person take his own live?.
What does the suicidal's family think the suicidal's family after that?. Has that person sometime searched for ever gotten (or sought) help?. We can't be indifferents, the actual suicide rate of suicides in the world is not normal. What happens is happening?. How we cant to help to stop it can we help stop it?.
No se pone un punto después del signo de interrogración. Simplemente "?", no "?."
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