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Letter Russia April 24 Dear Jack, Hi! How`s it going? Thanks for your last letter. In your letter you asked me about my attitude to cars. Well, I`m really fond of cars. My father taught mt to drive when I was five and now I am quite a good driver. Firstly, what about mopeds. I don`t like them. They scared me a little, I don`t know why. Secondly, every person has to take a driving test. It doesn`t matter it is a car or a very simple moped. Thirdly, a crash helmet protects drivers, so I believe they must wear it. Anyway, what car brand do you like? Are you going to take a driving teat? Will you take me a ride? Well, I`d better go now as I have to finish my homework. Write back soon. All the best, Elena

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Russia
April 24
Dear Jack,
Hi! How's it going? Thanks for your last letter.

You asked me about my opinion on cars in the last letter and i wanted to say that i am really interested in cars. When i was five years old, my father taught me how to drive and now i am a very good driver.

What do you think about mopeds? I don't like them beacuse they scare me a little bit. I dont know why though, but it must be dangerous because you have to wear a helmet for protection.

Every person who wants to drive, has to take a driving test. It doesn't matter if it is a car or a very simple moped or motorbike, everyone has to take one. When are you taking your driving test? Will you give me a ride when you pass?
Finally, what brands of car do you like? 
Well, I'd better go now as I have to finish my homework.
Please write back soon.
All the best,
Elena

 

 

 

 

 

 

***I changed the order of some of the sentences in the paragraph to make it slighlty better. Please let me know if you dont understand my corrections.

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