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Linna's self-introduction------part 1 I am linna , come from Chaozhou, a beautiful seaside city in eastern Guangdong,it is known as the ancient city and there are many tasty snacks ,even though I have left my hometown for several years , I still so miss it. When I was in middle school ,I desired to get rid of my parents ‘control ,so I choose a university in Guangzhou instead of in my hometown, but now it seems a stupid decision.

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Linna's self-introduction------part 1

My name is Linna. I came from Chaozhou, a beautiful seaside city in eastern Guangdong. It is known as the ancient city and there are many tasty snacks, even though I have left my hometown several years ago, I still miss it. When I was in middle school, I desired to escape my parent's control, so I choose a university in Guangzhou instead of in my hometown, but now it seems to be a stupid decision.

 

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1. "I am Linna" is also correct, but is much less commonly used in English. 

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wh you wrote,tasty snacks its mean people eat them,or any other common reason

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