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What is your reason to learn English? Please correct it for me. What is your reason to learn English? There are too many the reasons to learn English. As for every people, there are some different reasons. I want to share my reason for you. in fact, i have a main reason is to can find a good job. And besides, i hope my English ability will help me have many friends in the world. I want to search the cultural of many countries and special is i want to share all things with my foreign friends. I want to improve my knowledge. Now, many professional or reference book of different subject such as technology, science, tourism, economy, geology...have been write by English language. How can you read and understand them if you don't know English. And on the internet, there are many English Wed that are considered an information superhighway. So, this is also a big reason to learn English well. Last but not least, English will be able to help me entertain myself a lot. I can listen to many famous songs sang by famous singer in the world. And i can also watch movies by English. It's wonderful. Besides, there are many way of entertainment that i can get it if i am good at English. In short, English can me approach morden science, advanced technology and the development of the world. So, try to improve English to integrate into the world.

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What is your reason for learning English? 

There are too many the reasons to learn English. As for most people, there are various reasons. I want to share my reason with you. In fact, my main reason is to find a good job. And besides, I hope my English ability will help me have many friends in the world. I want to research the cultures of many countries and especially want to share things with my foreign friends. I want to improve my knowledge. Now, many professional or reference books of different subjects such as technology, science, tourism, economy, geology...have been written in the English language. How can you read and understand them if you don't know English? And on the Internet, there are many English websites that are considered an information superhighway. So, this is also a big reason to learn English well. Last but not least, English will be able to help me entertain myself a lot. I can listen to many famous songs sang by famous singers in the world. And I can also watch movies in English. It's wonderful. Besides, there are many types of entertainment that I can get if I am good at English.
In short, English can help me approach morden science, advanced technology and the development of the world. So, I'm trying to improve my English to integrate into the world.

 

NOTES:

1. Pretty good overall. I could understand what you meant even when there were minor grammatical errors.

 

2. Remember to always capitalize the pronoun I.

 

3. The word "many" should always be followed by a plural.

 

4. Good luck!

 

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its too long ,try to write something in short words ,its easy for us to correct it in short time...

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