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[ Discussion on italki 1 ] This was written for discussion on italki. If you have any opinion please write down it :) /////////// Why should we enroll in school at once after graduating from our high school? Most of countries enter school immediately.Of course,I also did it after graduating from my high school because I am Japanese and this is common in Japan.However,some people didn't it and the other couldn't it due to money problem, coming true their dreams other place except school,and not being able to get satisfactory results against their first entrance examination. However, I have heard that some country don't think like that. They are tolerant of giving the time when people think about their future and job after graduating their previous school and job. I think it is good to make the time to do it. When the hardship we can't avoid in order to fulfill our dream comes,I can face up to the hardship more earnestly than not making the time. How about your country? Are your country tolerant toward not going to school at once after graduating? Is this good? or bad? * Please do correction in my notebook if you become impatient at my English.

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In London we begin to send off university applications almost immediately after beginning our second year of high school. Similarly we have to enroll shortly after collecting our grades, from high school. I remember for high school we needed to inform our middle school of where we are enrolling when we were collecting our grades. I never thought enrolling in other countries or if it was mandatory haha.
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[ Discussion on italki 1 ]

This was written for discussion on italki.
If you have any opinions please write them (down) it below:)

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Why should do we enroll in for school at once after graduating from our high school?

Most of countries enter enroll for school immediately after graduating. Of course, I also did it after graduating from my high school because as I am Japanese and this is common in Japan. (after punctuation you should put a space after) However, some people didn't don't do it and the others couldn't it due to problems with money problem, however their dreams may comes true as coming true their dreams other places may except school them, rather than and not being able to get satisfactory results against appose to their first entrance examination.

However, I have heard that some countryies don't think like that (or in the same way). They are tolerant of giving the time when to people thinking about their future and jobs after graduating from their previous school and or job.

I think it is good to make the time to do it. When we can't avoid When the hardship we can't avoid in order to fulfill our dreams comes, I can face up to the hardship more earnestly than not making the time.

How about your country?

Are Is your country tolerant towards not going to school at once straight after graduating?

Is this it good? or bad?


* Please do correction in my notebook if you become impatient at my English. (<lol)

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It's great to know people in Japan value education so much. I always assumed many Japanese graduates return to their hometowns to take over family businesses. I don't blame some people for not pursuing university degrees due to money problems but I think people put too much pressure on themselves to be accepted into distinguished and reputable schools. I think taking cheaper (or even free) classes is better than not learning at all. Taking some time off to plan your future is great, as long as you end up studying what you love and not worrying about which school will accept you. Everyone I know who took a break after high school (1-2 years) never regretted it. Some traveled, others got married. One started a career and never went back to college. But I believe we should always be studying something, even if it's just one class every year, even if I had a job and kids, regardless of the degree or career opportunities. The learning process doesn't stop at high school nor college. It lasts a lifetime :D
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Interesting topic and your English was a pleasure to read. I'll try add some corrections and suggestions just to show support~

 

Why should we enroll in school at once after graduating from our (no need for "our" since "high school" is a generic noun) high school?


Most of countries [In most countries, people] enter school immediately. Of course, I also did it after graduating from my high school because I am Japanese and this is common in Japan. However, some people didn't it and the others couldn't it due to money problems, coming true pursuing/fulfilling/realizing their dreams in other places except beside school [or: in places other than school] and not being able to get satisfactory results against in their first entrance examination.

 

Notes on replacing verbs with "did" and replacing nouns with "it":
you can either say "didn't do it / couldn't do it" or you can just say "didn't/couldn't." It depends on what you want to say.


"I also entered school <--> I also did."
"some people couldn't enter <--> some people couldn't."


A: Did you take out the garbage?
B: Yes, I did. / No, I didn't.

(I took out the garbage <--> I did.)


A: Did you do your homework assignment?
B: Yes, I did it. / No, I didn't do it.

(it <---> my homework assignment)


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Notes on "coming true:"
☺ Dreams come true.
☺ People's dreams come true.
☺ People make dreams come true.
☺ Dreams come true for people.
X People come true their dreams.

 

However, I have heard that some countries don't think like that. They are tolerant of giving the time when people think about their future [giving people time to think about their future] and jobs after graduating from their previous school and job.
I think it is good to make take time off to do it. When the hardship we can't avoid in order to fulfill our dream comes, I can face up to the hardship it more earnestly than not making the time if I hadn't taken some time off.

 

Hope I didn't make things more complicated...!


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[ Discussion on italki 1 ]

This was written for discussion on italki.
If you have any opinion please write down it :)

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Why should we enroll in uni at once after graduating from our high school?

 

In most countries people enter univercity immediately after graduation. Of course, I did too after graduating from my high school because I am Japanese and this is common in Japan. However, some people don't do it because they can't it due to money problems or found a was of making their dreams come true in another way, or not being able to get satisfactory results in their first entrance examination.

However, I have heard that some country don't think like that. They are tolerant and give time to people to think about their future and job after graduating their previous school/job.

I think it is good to take time to think about it. When hardship we can't avoid stop us form fulfilling our dream.I can face the hardship more earnestly than not making the time. I'm not sure what you mean by that

How about your country?

Is your country tolerant toward those not going to univercity instantly after highschool?

Is this good? or bad?


* Please do correction in my notebook if you become impatient at my English.

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