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Sharonbee
Chased by dogs My son was chased by dogs twice today. For the first time, my son walked from school at noon and he noticed a black dog nearby. He was so naughty and raised his hand in a gesture of attack. As a result, he ran away along the street and left me alone. Later, he finished his homework at home and would like to join me for a stroll in the afternoon. When we were on the way home, we encountered a black puppy chasing after us and the puppy licked my son's ankle. He ran away and left me alone once again! A passby saw us so frightened. Although he wondered why we were so scared of the tiny dog, he still gave us a hand by catching the puppy's notice.

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Chased by dogs

Twice today, my son was chased by dogs. (its a better expression, but '...dogs twice today' is still fine)

For the first time, my son walked from school at noon and he noticed a black dog nearby. He was so naughty and raised his hand in a gesture of attack. As a result, he ran away along the street and left me alone. (I'm not sure why he raised his hand then ran away, was he going to hit the dog? or something else. It would add to the article if you elaborated on that ^^) 

Later, he finished his homework at home and wanted to join me for a stroll in the afternoon. When we were on the way home, we encountered a black puppy chasing after us and the puppy licked my son's ankle. He ran off without me again!

A passerby saw us and noticed how frightened we were. Although he wondered why we were so scared of the tiny dog, he still gave us a hand by taking the puppy's attention from us.

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Yes, I didn't described in detail about that indeed. Well, my son realizes that I've been afraid of dogs all the time. At that time, he would like to make me nervous by having the dog's attention on purpose as we saw a dog lying on the sidewalk. Unexpectedly, once he raised his hand, the dog barked at him, so he ran away promptly because he was scared of the dog as well. In Chinese, this behavior was called "自作自受！" ~誰叫他這麼調皮。^^

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