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Poverty is curse Poverty is one of the biggest issues of the 21st century, but no one pays serious attention and efforts to resolve it. Hundreds of thousand people dying due to the shortage of food, and clean water. Children are suffering from malnutrition and unhealthy food exposes them to crippling diseases. Poor is getting poorest and rich is becoming richer every day. People don't have sufficient money to manage their expenses of household. Poverty in its worst form forces girls to become the prostitute or commit suicide. Those who do not have a home, live on streets. There is no hope, futures looks bleak.The earth is on the brink of catastrophe, stronger countries are eyeing on weaker countries to expand their influence and expand exploit natural resources making

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Poverty is a curse

Poverty is one of the biggest issues of the 21st century, but no one pays serious attention to it and nor make efforts to resolve it. Hundreds of thousands of people dying die every day due to the shortage of food and clean water. Children are suffering from malnutrition and unhealthy food exposes them to crippling diseases. The poor is are getting poorest becoming poorer and rich is are becoming richer every day. People don't do not have sufficient money to manage their household expenses of household. Poverty in its worst form forces girls to become the prostitutes or drive them to commit suicide. Those who do not have a home, live on streets. There is no hope, futures looks bleak.The earth is on the brink of catastrophe, stronger countries are eyeing on exploiting weaker countries to by expand extending their influence to them and expand exploit draining their natural resources. making

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Poverty is curse

Poverty is one of the biggest issues of the 21st century, but no one pays serious attention to it and makes an effort to solve it and efforts to resolve it. Hundreds of thousands of people die every day dying due to the shortage of food, and  of clean water. Children are suffering from malnutrition and unhealthy food exposes them to crippling diseases.The Poor is  are getting poorest poorer and the   rich is are becoming richer every day. People don't have sufficient enough money to manage their expenses of household household expenses. Poverty in its worst form forces girls to become the prostitutes or commit suicide. Those who do not have a home, live on the streets. There is no hope, the futures looks bleak.The Earth is on the brink of catastrophe, stronger countries are eyeing  preying on weaker countries to expand their influence and expand  the exploitation  of their natural resources. making


Very heartfelt essay. Sorry I had to change some things. The level is quite good, there was just some confusion in the last sentence.

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