My Maracucho trip
One month ago exactly, I went to Maracaibo city in venezuela west for first time, it was an incredible experience, together four friends more, we took a airplane from Caracas for go to a run, organized for gatorade, a sport drink, often we running only in Caracas, this time we decide go more far, we met a part of city in only two days because it was a weekend event, the principal church, the people of this city are very religious, a big park in front a lake, the view was scenic, at nigth we enjoy of a old pizzeria famous in this place and we drunk a little beer, we were early to bed, the second day was amazing. the run started early morning and we could improve our times in road, at the afrternoon, we went to eat to a terrific tipycal restaurant. The monday morning we had that come back to Caracas a little sad, but it was a big experience.
I hope haven't many mistake, thanks for viewer.
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My Maracucho trip
One month ago exactly, I went to Maracaibo city in venezuela west for first time. It was an incredible experience. Together with four friends, we took an airplane from Caracas to go for a run organized for gatorade, the sports drink. Often we were running only in Caracas, but this time we decided to go further. We met a part of city in only two days because it was a weekend event.
The principal church, the people of this city are very religious, a big park in front a lake, the view was scenic.(Don't understand this at all, sorry.)
At night we enjoyed an old pizzeria that's famous in this place and we drunk a little beer. We went to bed early. The second day was amazing. The run started early morning and we could improve our times on the road. At the afternoon we went to eat at a terrific typical restaurant. The monday morning we had come back to Caracas, a little sad, but it was a big experience.
I hope haven't made many mistakes. Thanks for viewing.
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Tips.
Don't have run on sentences like you do, constantly adding commas.
Sound the word out and spell like that.
And finally, structure your sentences better. I get it's a story, but still this had a couple of misplaced/odd sentences.
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