I NEED HELP!!!

Hi everyone!! My teacher got angry and he put a homework about writing 250 words of what is the ideal attitude of an english student. If someone can correct my work I'd be so grateful. Here it is:


IDEAL ATTITUDE OF AN ENGLISH STUDENT
Well, first of all I need to say that the most important thing is : to talk in English. Of course, if it’s an English class, then you are supposed to speak in English. It’s such an awful thing for the teacher to always listen to students talking in their own languages. If you want to speak in Spanish, just get out of the classroom or just wait till the bell rings.
I mean, if we want to learn something (anything, not just a language) we NEED to practice it, even if it’s math exercises or chemical formulas or, in this case, English. The ideal attitude of an English student is to be always interested in what they can learn about that language. So, if we don’t do math exercises, then how we are going to learn? It is the same thing with languages, we need to always use them in our daily lives. That way we will know new words and we will improve our skills. So, I think that if we have the opportunity to use English like five days a week we have to take advantage of that.
Another thing is the respect.  The school and our parents are always saying to us, “Students, you must be respectful with all of your teachers because they are helping you to become an excellent person in the future” and that’s true. If we want to be someone really important, we have to do our best. We need to have a good relationship with our schoolmasters because they’ve study more and they have more knowledge of the theme that we want (and we need) to learn.
To conclude, that’s my thought about this. We need to have a better disposition for the English class, because it will impact in our futures and in the persons that we will become. Of course, we need to revise how our values are working in order to become 32 good human beings.

I NEED HELP!!!

Hi everyone!! My teacher got angry and he put a assigned my class a 250 word homework assignment about the ideal attitude of an english student. about writing 250 words of what is. If someone can could correct my work, I would appreciate it 'd be so grateful. Here it is:


The Ideal Attitude of an English Student (It's best not to write a title in all caps, as it does not look professional.)

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Muy bien, Laura! Your passage is a little bit longer than 250 words, though (before and after my corrections). Will your teacher penalize you for going over the word limit? You seem to really like learning English, and you would be a plesure to teach!