Dormitory or student's house

Hi everyone! I came university and I wrote essay about dormitory or student's house. I wrote good today . I made too little mistakes so I was very happy. I will write several sentences from my essay. ____--ıf you study university in another city, you should stay in a dormitory or student's house. You have to prefer one of them. I think,when you stay in a dormitory, your life is difficult sometimes,because you have to obey to rules. If you stay in a student's house you should do housework and cook but if you stay in a dormitory you don't have to Don housework. And staying in a dormitory is cheaper than staying in a student's house, so a lot of students prefer stay in a dormitory because of financial problems.

Hi everyone! I came to university and I wrote an essay about a dormitory or student's house. I wrote good well today . I made a few too little mistakes so I was very happy. I will write several sentences from my essay. ____--ıf you study at university in another city, you should stay in a dormitory or student's house. You have to prefer choose one of them. I think, when you stay in a dormitory, your life is difficult sometimes, because you have to obey to the rules. If you stay in a student's house you should do housework and cook but if you stay in a dormitory you don't have to Don do housework. And Also, staying in a dormitory is cheaper than staying in a student's house, so a lot of students prefer stay in a dormitory because of financial problems.

Well done :) this was easy to understand but be careful not to forget to use prepositions correctly otherwise your writing will sound strange. Here is a link for you to look at. http://www.chompchomp.com/terms/preposition.htm

Dormitory or student's house

Hi everyone! I came to university and I wrote an essay about dormitories and student's houses. I wrote well today . I made very few mistakes, so I was very happy. I will write several sentences from my essay. ____--ıf you study at university in another city, you should stay in a dormitory or student's house. You will prefer one of them. When you stay in a dormitory, I think your life is difficult sometimes, because you have to obey the rules. If you stay in a student's house, you should do housework and cook, but if you stay in a dormitory you don't have to do housework. Also, staying in a dormitory is cheaper than staying in a student's house, so a lot of students prefer to stay in a dormitory because of financial problems.

Dormitory or student's house

Hi everyone! I came to university and I wrote an essay about dormitory or student's house. I wrote well today . I made two little mistakes so I was very happy. I will write several sentences from my essay. ____--ıf you study at university in another city, you should stay in a dormitory or student's house. You have to prefer one of them. I think when you stay in a dormitory, your life is difficult sometimes,because you have to obey the rules. If you stay in a student's house you have to do housework and cook but if you stay in a dormitory you don't have to do any housework. Staying  in a dormitory is cheaper than staying in a student's house, so a lot of students prefer to stay in a dormitory because of financial problems.