My cat
Hello! I love cats. But, I didn't have any cats in my home. And a month ago, I was walking on the street, and I was meet a little cat. He was being hungry and tired. So, I was thinking: "Why not?", and was getting he with myself. Now, I am have cat in my home :)
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My cat
Hello! I love cats. Bbut, until recently I didn't have any cats in my home. And A month ago, I was walking on the street, and I was meet met a little cat. He was being hungry and tired. So, I was thinking thought: "Why not?", and was getting he with get one for myself. Now, I am have cat in my home :)
Most of this was OK and would be understood by an English person except the following.
"and was getting he with myself" here you must use the object pronoun "One" not the personal pronoun "He"
Good Luck :)
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My cat
Hello! I love cats, but I didn't have any [cat] at home; however, a month ago I was walking on the street, and I saw a little cat. It was [being] hungry and tired, so I thought "Why not?", and took it with me. Now, I [am] have a cat at home :)
I hope this helps! :)
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My cat
Hello! I love cats. But I don't have any cats in my home. A month ago I was walking on the street, I met a little cat. He was hungry and tired, so I thought to myself "Why not?". I took him home with me. Now, I have cat in my home :)
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instead of saying "I have a cat in my home" or "I don't have a cat in my home" you should say "I own a cat" or "I don't own a cat" however the first version still works, it's just the alternative sounds better.
If you're going to use "and" you shouldn't use a comma (,)and if you're going to use a comma (,) you shouldn't use "and"
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