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Vacations
The time of exams is over, so now i I can think about my next holidays (upcoming holidays sounds better!). I thinked have been thinking a lot of about the destinations. As France is amazing by the diversity of landscapes and culture, I will stay in the national territory. I really love the south-east of France, there's the sea, lot of beaches, and the most important of all for vacations is that it's very sunny there.
I just wonder if I want to stay there for one week or move along the coast for the week. I really appreciate my vacations while where I'm doing a promenade (taking a walk) near the palm trees, and sitting on a bench in front of the sea. That's stunning for one week to do nothing and live it up!
One typical day is to discover the region in the morning, and the afternoon to just appreciate the weather and to sunbathe in the afternoon. In the evening, I will sit with some friends in a balcony to just admire the wonderful sea, with the sun... And don't forget a glass of wine.. And the moment will be more than awesome.
Well, I know we're just in it's still April, but I am already thinking about being lazy on in July... I just have to wait 3 more months and the "French Dream" may begin!
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Your upcoming vacation, as well as your English, sounds fantastic! I wish you a good time in South-eastern France :)
Vacations
The time of exams is over, so now I can think about my next holidays. I thought thinked a lot about of the destination. As France is amazing because of by the diversity of landscapes and culture, I will stay in the national territory. I really love the South-East of France, because there's the sea, lots of beaches, and the most importantly for vacations is that it's very sunny there.
I just wonder if I want to stay there for one week or move along the coast for the week. I really appreciate my vacations while I walk doing a promenade near the palm trees, and sit on a bench in front of the sea. That'sIt's stunning for one week to do nothing for one week and live it up!
One typical day would be [1] is to discover the region in the morning, and the afternoon just enjoy sunbathing in the afternoon [2] appreciate to sunbath. In the evening, sit with some friends in a balcony and just admire the wonderful sea, with the sun... And don't forget a glass of wine.. And the moment will be more than awesome.
Well, I know we're just in April, but I already think about being lazy on July... I just have to wait 3 months and the "French Dream" will may begin! [3]
[1] You are trying to describe a future wish, so we are using a form of subjunctive here.
[2] It is better to match the position of the time in the sentence ("in the morning" & "in the afternoon" are both at the end of the sentences)
[3] Grammatically, this is correct. But even if you are not yet sure about July, it is better to be enthusiastic about it and say "will" rather than "may".
Note: Your sentences are really great, and I hope you will be able to fullfill your wish of a summer vacation!
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