my first input
Well... like the title say, this is my first input in my diary, I think that my grammar is very bad, for example the structure, some times I invest the letters.
anyway.. I like the rock music, but I can't understand nothing. i wish improve my english skills for undertand the rock lyrics.
I feel very grateful if this text is corrected.
see you soon
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my first input
Well... like the title say, this is my first entry in my diary, I think that my grammar is very bad, for example the structure, some times I invert(??) the letters.
anyway.. I like the rock music, but I can't understand anything. i wish to improve my english skills to understand the rock lyrics.
I would be very grateful if this text is corrected.
see you soon
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my first input
Well, like the title says, this is my first input in my diary. I think that my grammar is very bad because some times I invest the letters.
Anyways, I like rock music, but I can't understand anything. I wish to improve my english skills to understand the rock lyrics.
I will feel very grateful if this text is corrected.
See you soon.
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This was good man! I could understand most of it, with the exception of your use of the word "invest." Overall I was pretty impressed, especially considering that this was your first post in your diary. If you have any questions don't hesitate to message me.
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