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What makes you feel happy? Yesterday, I wrote something about 'depression' I've suffered from. Many people wrote helpful comments for me. It made me feel comfortable and happy. So, I'd like to talk about 'Things make you happy' with you guys. Come to think of it, I have a lot of things make me happy. First of all my family is invaluable for me. When my daughter smiles at me, I couldn't help smiling back. I could forget everything. Even though I'd felt sad then. Second. My job is a kind of thing that makes me feel alive. When I'd finished my tack successfully, I feel a sense of accomplishment. It's also important part of my happiness. Last but not the least, when someone looks feel happy because of me I can feel happy too. I have a question. What make you feel happy even though you're on worse condition?

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What makes you feel happy?

Yesterday, I wrote something about the 'depression' I sometimes suffered from.
Many people wrote helpful comments for to me. It made me feel comfortable and happy.
So, I'd like to talk about 'Things which make you me happy' with you guys.

Come to think of it, I have a lot of things which make me happy.
First of all, my family is invaluable for to me. When my daughter smiles at me, I couldn't can't help but smiling smile back.
I could forget everything. Even though I'd felt sad then. (I don't quite understand :( )

Second, My job is a kind of thing that makes me feel alive. When I successfully finish my task, I feel a sense of accomplishment. It's also an important part of my happiness.

Last but not the least, when someone looks like they feel happy because of me I can feel happy too.

I have a question. What make you feel happy even though when you're mental condition is bad.

 

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