CLASSWORK: special people. write and article

Special People – write and article

Nowadays, everybody has someone special or important in his their life. We have always needed someone to tell your us our problems, confidences. On the one hand, you can have someone special close to you, and or on the other hand, this person can be any person that you want. (Suggested edit: On one hand, you can have it be someone close to you, or on the other hand, it could be someone new.)

Now, I am going to write about my personal experience. There are a lot of important people in my life, in all parts of my life. I always had any form of support from my parents, my sister, or even some friends, all of them are specials to me.
Special for me in the strict sense is my wife. She has been become special to me little by little, as we got to knowing each other, supporting each other in good and difficult moments. She is someone unconditional and someone very critical if it is necessary. Overall and more important, is to have always have someone that understands you.

CLASSWORK: special people. write and article

Special People – write and article

Nowadays, everybody has someone special or important in his their life. We have always needed someone to tell your share our problems, confidences. On the one hand, you can have someone special close to you, and on the other hand, this person can be any person that you want.

Now, I am going to write about my personal experience. There are a lot of important people in my life, in all parts of my life. I always had any form of complete support from my parents or my sister, even some friends (or "even a friend" if you mean just one), all of them are specials to me.
Special for me in the strict sense is my wife. She has been special to me little by little, knowing each other, supporting each other in good and difficult moments, she is someone unconditional and someone very critical if it is necessary. Over all Overall and more important, is to have always have someone that understands you.

Very good. My corrections are in red and my suggestions to sound more natural are in blue/grey.

I think that "everybody has someone special in his life" is probably grammatically correct, but it's more common to hear "in their life" or more correctly "in their lives". The most correct form is probably "in his or her life" but most people just say "their" to cover both sexes.