culture identity

A great many countries around the world are gradually losing their culture identity because of the prevalence of the Internet.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There are a considerable number of people who believe that the widely use of the internet poses a threat to most countries’ own cultural features. I am of this opinion to a certain extent.

Nowadays, the internet has plays a vital role in human society and make allows people from all around the world to know each other better than ever before. Due to the high speed of the information transfer, people are able turn to learn about other countries’ cultures and then try something new. That is why some countries unique cultures and/or customs have become popular all over the world. This culture identity may lose the unique meaning it had in to its original country, but it has a positive effect on culture acutally spreading further and becoming more well known actually.

More often than not, people in this fast paced society use the internet to do some celebration activities instead of doing them face to face like before. For example, when China’s Mid Autumn Day comes, Chinese families used to get together and enjoy viewing the moon view in the past, while people today just send an online card with a picture of the moon view to their relatives to express the greeting. Admittedly the internet make it people easy for people to lead a convenient life, but it also lets people become lazy to in keeping their traditional customs. There are is much evidence to show that some traditional cultures may gradually disappear in this highly informative information age society.

Overuse of the internet has dramatically changed people’s lives in every country, for some of which it is hard to keep their own culture identity because of the culture synchronization caused by the prevalence of the internet.

Hi I made some changes to make it more natural. Hope it helps.

(Also internet does not need to be capital I)