My dream job !

Dear all, I'm practicing writing some articles about myself. Could you please revise the inappropriate grammer or sentence for me? Thanks a lot :)


I'm Michelle from Taiwan. People in Taiwan are hospitable and willing to help people who need assistance. I'm glad that I'm one of them. My major is fishing, therefore I attend fisherman training. I've been trained to be cooperative and self-disciplined.
My previous job was an executive secretary in a mobile game company. Even though that is totally different from my major, I still solved many problems. I don't mind asking siners (what word are you trying to say here?) for help, because I know I'll learn a lot from them. Their experience can help me with the situation as soon as possible.
After years of working, I found the position of flight attendant to be my dream job. I like to assist people and make them feel comfortable. I'm patient, hardworking and disciplined. If given the opportunity to work for you, I would like to become a professional cabin crew member by completing your company's high quality training. I'm looking forward to it.

My dream job !

Deal all, I'm practicing writing some articles about myself. Could you please rivise the inappropriate grammer or sentance for me? Thanks a lot :)


I'm Michelle coming from Taiwan. People in Taiwan are hospitable and willing to help people who need assistance. I'm glad that I'm one of them. My major is fishing, so I've attened *attained a fisherman training in being a fisherman. I've been trained to be cooperative and self-disciplined.

In my previous job, I was is an executive secretary in a mobile game company. Even though that is totally different from my major, I still solved many problems. I don't mind to asking the siners (did you mean 'managers?') for help, because I know I'll learn a lot from them. Their experience can help me into understand the situation as soon as possible.
After years of working, I have found that the position of flight attendant is my dream job. I like to assist people and make them feel comfortable. I'm patient, hardworking and disciplined. If given the opportunity for from your company, I will be a professional cabin crew member by and complete the all high quality training of yours I am faced with. And I'm looking forward to it hearing from you.

My dream job !

Deal all, I'm practicing writing some articles about myself. Could you please rivise the inappropriate grammer (grammar) or sentance (sentence) for me? Thanks a lot :)


I'm Michelle, I'm coming from Taiwan. People in Taiwan are hospitable and willing to help people who need assietance (assistance). I'm glad that I'm one of them. My major is fishing, so I've attened (attended) (maybe better: I attended) a fisherman training. I've been trained to be cooperative and self-disciplined.
My previous job is an executive secretary in a mobile game company. Even though that is totally different from my major, I still solved many problems . I don't mind to ask the siners (signers) for help, because I know I'll learn a lot from them. Their experience can help me into the situation as soon as possible.
After years of working, I found the position of flight attendant which is my dream job. I like to assist people and make them feel comfortable. I'm patient, hardworking and disciplined. If given the (an) opportunity for (by) your company, I will be a professional cabin crew member by completeing the high quality training of yours. And I'm looking forword to it.