Love!!
All my life I have been in love to the concept off love, At this moment I've noticed that this happend because TV shows and movies, society sold us the concept off love, making us believe that the real life is so,
People without boyfriend or girlfriend feel bad and sad because there is something wrong with them, that is not right. The love is a wonderful power and has to make people feel good =)
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Love!!
All my life I have been in love to with the idea [concept] off love. Now [At this moment] I've realised [noticed] that this happensd because through TV shows and movies, society has sold us the concept off love, making us believe that the real life is so, the same/like this/similar
People without a boyfriend or girlfriend feel bad and sad because there is something wrong with them, but that is not right. The Love is a wonderful power, and has to should make people feel good =)
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Love!!
All my life I have been in love with the concept of love. At this moment I've noticed that this happened because of TV shows and movies. Society sold us the concept of love, making us believe that the real life is this way.
People without a boyfriend or girlfriend feel bad and sad because there is something wrong with them and that is not right. The Love is a wonderful power and has to make people feel good =)
Hey great job! Keep up the good work and I am also a big fan of love :P
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Thanks Maximo for read my entry =) Yes you are right...
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Yes, I was thinking about that two weeks ago, and I have come to the conclusion that maybe the things that we know about love are related to our culture. So maybe we have a lots of cultural impositions about love. But like your final sentences love is wonderful, and make people happy. We fell awesone when we falling in love to somebody.
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