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Formal letter) Dear Sir Doyle, I am writing to ask for information about the house you are selling. I am currently looking for a espacious flat because I just got married and we are planning to have children in the future. I am 29 and I work in a bank, my wife works as a nurse at the weekends. We are especially interested for the flat's localitation but also we would like to see if it is what we are looking for. I have already seen the pictures but we have to take a look personally to make a decision. When can we go to visit it? How many square metres does the flat have? We also need to know the terms and the conditions. I hope to meet you soon and talk about all these issues. Your faithfully, Javier.

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Formal letter)

Dear Sir Doyle,

I am writing to ask for information about the house you are selling. I am currently looking for a espacious flat because I just got married and we are planning to have children in the future. I am 29 years old and I work in a bank; my wife works as a nurse at the weekends. We are especially interested forin the flat's location, but also we would like to see if it is what we are looking for.

I have already seen the pictures, but we have to take a look in person to make a decision. When can we go to visit it? How many square metres does the flat have? We also need to know the terms and the conditions.

I hope to meet you soon and talk about all these issues.

Yours faithfully,

Javier.

 

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Very good! Aside from a few minor grammar and spelling issues, this is great! Best of luck with your studies! :) 

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Formal letter)

Dear Sir Doyle,

I am writing to ask for information about the house you are selling. I am currently looking for a espacious flat because I just got married and we are planning to have children in the future. I am 29 and I work in a bank, my wife works as a nurse at the weekends. We are especially interested for the flat's localitation but also we would like to see if it is what we are looking for.

I have already seen the pictures but we have to take a look personally to make a decision. When can we go to visit it? How many square metres does the flat have? We also need to know the terms and the conditions.
I hope to meet you soon and talk about all these issues.
Your faithfully,

Javier.

 

Dear Sir Doyle,

I am writing to ask for information about the house you are selling. I am currently looking for a spacious flat because I just got married and my wife and I are planning to have children in the future. I am 29 years old and I work in a bank, my wife works as a nurse on the weekends. We are especially interested in the flat's location but would like to see if it is what we are looking for.

I have already seen the pictures but we have to take a look in person to make a decision. When can we go to visit it? How many square metres does the flat have? We also need to know the terms and the conditions about the purchase of the house.
I hope to meet you soon and talk about all these issues.
Your faithfully,

Javier.

 

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Thank you, i don't think about the rules when i'm writing but i hear a lot expressions so i use them later
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I agree with the correction below. Two more things: Generally you would only start out with Sir if you don't know the name of the person you are writing to. If you know the name you would write Mr. Doyle. In American English you are more likely to say "works as a nurse ON the weekend" rather than at. I believe in British English AT is the preferred choice. Good Job!

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