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Making a travelling album
I started to travel on Feb 25th, 2015. My trip will last roughly one year.I'll make an album to collect my favourite photos that I took will take from all over the world.
Is Are these sentences right in English?
Please correct me!!
Good job. Remember:
You spelt favourite wrong. Favourite is spelt with a 'u' it is not spelt - favorite.
Also Travelling is spelt with 2 L's and not just one.
The reason why i corrected ' I took ' and made it ' will take ' is because in English we say ' I took ' if we have already done it. For example: I went to Japan and took some photos. This is in the past tense because I have already done it. I corected I took as Will take because you haven't already taken these pictures :)
I hope you understand what i've said. You done a great job and the only thing you need to brush up on is spelling and grammar a tiny bit. がんばってね ^_^
Making traveling album
I started to travel from 25 February this year. The term is roughly one year.
I'll make an album with my favorite photos that I took all over the world.
Is these sentences right English?
Please correct me!!
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