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Making traveling album I started to travel on 25 February in 2015. The term is roughly one year. I'll make an album to collect my favorite photos that I took all over the world. Is these sentences right English? Please collect me!!

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Making a travelling album

I started to travel on Feb 25th, 2015. My trip will last roughly one year.
I'll make an album to collect my favourite photos that I took will take from all over the world.

Is Are these sentences right in English?  
Please correct me!!
 

Good job. Remember:

You spelt favourite wrong. Favourite is spelt with a 'u' it is not spelt - favorite.

Also Travelling is spelt with 2 L's and not just one.

The reason why i corrected ' I took ' and made it ' will take ' is because in English we say ' I took ' if we have already done it. For example: I went to Japan and took some photos. This is in the past tense because I have already done it. I corected I took as Will take because you haven't already taken these pictures :)

 

I hope you understand what i've said. You done a great job and the only thing you need to brush up on is spelling and grammar a tiny bit. がんばってね ^_^

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Thank you very much!!
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Are these sentences right in English?
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Making traveling album

I started to travel from 25 February this year. The term is roughly one year.
I'll make an album with my favorite photos that I took all over the world.

Is these sentences right English?
Please correct me!!

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It's pretty good. I'd write: I started travelling on Feb. 25th, 2015. My trip will last roughly one year. I'll make and album to collect my favorite photos that I took from all over the world.

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