[Practice my write] ABOUT BRAZIL

Brazil is a country in South America. It is a big country and has about 200 million people. Here in Brazil we have 26 states + 1 federal district. They are: Minas Gerais, São Paulo, Rio de Janeiro, Amazonas, Acre, Tocantins, Rio Grande do Sul, Mato Grosso do Sul, Bahia, Roraima, Rondonia, Amapá, Para, Goias, Maranhão, Ceará, Paraiba, Pernambuco, Alagoas, Sergipe, Piaui, Espirito Santo, Paraná, Santa Catarina, Mato Grosso and Distrito Federal, which is a federal district. Because there is so many states, I don't know one person that has visited all these places. I only went into Rio de Janeiro, Espirito Santo, Santa Catarina and Minas Gerais.
So many people think that Brazil is only Carnaval, sex and stealing, but it is not. For exemple, only a some people know what is Canaval. Most people think that carnaval is only what they watched in television ' naked women in Rio de Janeiro'. But, any state in Brazil celebrate carnaval like that. In Ouro preto for example they have music shows and people drink beer or caipirinha. About the sex, all people have sex if they want. Not just here. we have men and women that do not have sex before gettinf married, and have people who do.
Stealing is really a big problem here. I think is because of social inequality. Here we have a lot of poor people, and a lot of corruption too. Recently, our politicians stole a lot of money in a state company -PETROBRAS-. I think the problem is the people, cause they put this person in a power.
However, have a lot of good thingd here too. For the rich people the life is like in the United States or other developed country. A lot of trees, beaches, and amazing places. A good place for you to visit is Fernando de Noronha, Rio de Janeiro (COPA CABANA, IPANEMA, BARRA DA TIJUCA, CABO FRIO, ARRAIAL DO CABO), Florianópolos, some places in NORDESTE, and others.

[Practice my write] ABOUT BRAZIL

Brazil is situated in south america. It is a big country and it has about 200 million people. there are  26 states + 1 federal district. They are: Minas Gerais, São Paulo, Rio de Janeiro, Amazonas, Acre, Tocantins, Rio Grande do Sul, Mato Grosso do Sul, Bahia, Roraima, Rondonia, Amapá, Para, Goias, Maranhão, Ceará, Paraiba, Pernambuco, Alagoas, Sergipe, Piaui, Espirito Santo, Paraná, Santa Catarina, Mato Grosso and Distrito Federal that is a federal district. Because of many  states, i don't know anyone that visited all these place. I only went to Rio de Janeiro, Espirito Santo, Santa Catarina and Minas Gerais.
A lot of people think that Brazil is Carnaval, sex and thefts, but it isn't true. For exemple, a fwe people know what carneval is. most people think that carnaval is only what they watch on television ' naked women in Rio de Janeiro'. But, each state in Brazil celebrates carnaval like that. (with naked women?? ) In Ouro preto for example there are music shows and people drink beer or caipirinha. About the sex, all people have sex if want. Not just here. Have man and women that no have sex before married, and have people who do. (did you mean that sex is everywhere not only in Brazil?)
Theft is a really serious problem here. I think  due to social inequality. there are a lot of poor people and there is a lot of corruption too. Recently, our politics stole a lot of money from a state company -PETROBRAS-. I think the problem is the people, cause they voted this person to be a politician.
However, we have a lot of good things too. For the rich people life is like in the united states or in other developed countries. there are lot of trees, beaches, and amazing places. A good place for you to visit is Fernando de Noronha, Rio de Janeiro (COPA CABANA, IPANEMA, BARRA DA TIJUCA, CABO FRIO, ARRAIAL DO CABO), Florianópolos, some places in NORDESTE, and others.

Wow! It's sound beautiful, I wanna go to brazil!! :D

Brazil is a country in South America. It's a big country and has about 200 million of people inhabitant. Here have There are 26 states + 1 federal district. They There are: Minas Gerais, São Paulo, Rio de Janeiro, Amazonas, Acre, Tocantins, Rio Grande do Sul, Mato Grosso do Sul, Bahia, Roraima, Rondonia, Amapá, Para, Goias, Maranhão, Ceará, Paraiba, Pernambuco, Alagoas, Sergipe, Piaui, Espirito Santo, Paraná, Santa Catarina, Mato Grosso and Distrito Federal that is a federal district. Because is so many states of the great numbers of the states, i don't know one person that have visited all there place these places. I only went in to Rio de Janeiro, Espirito Santo, Santa Catarina and Minas Gerais.
So many people think that Brazil is only Carnaval, sex and stolen, but not is it. For exemple, only a little people know what is Canaval. The most of people think that carnaval is only what they watched in television ' nuked nacked women in Rio de Janeiro'. But, any state in Brazil celebrate carnaval like that. In Ouro preto for example there are some have music shows and people drink beer or caipirinha. About the sex, all people have sex if they want. Not just here. Have there is men and women that no have sex before married, and have people who do.
Stolen is really a big problem here. I think is because it is due to social inequalities. Here there are have a lot of poor people. Have there is a lot of corruption too. Recently, our politics stolen a lot of money in a state company -PETROBRAS-. I think the problem is the people, cause they put this person in a power.
However, have a there are lots of good things here too. For the rich people the life is like in a the United States or others developed countries. Have a There are lots of trees, beaches, and amazing places. A good place for you you must visit is Fernando de Noronha, Rio de Janeiro (COPA CABANA, IPANEMA, BARRA DA TIJUCA, CABO FRIO, ARRAIAL DO CABO), Florianópolos, some places in NORDESTE, and others.

Brazil is a large country in South America, with about 200 million. (it sounds more natural to put more information in one sentence. Don’t forget to capitalize names like South America.

There ARE 26 states AND (use the word, not the symbol when writing sentences) One (use the word and not the symbol) Federal District.

They are: Minas Gerais, São Paulo, Rio de Janeiro, Amazonas, Acre, Tocantins, Rio Grande do Sul, Mato Grosso do Sul, Bahia, Roraima, Rondonia, Amapá, Para, Goias, Maranhão, Ceará, Paraiba, Pernambuco, Alagoas, Sergipe, Piaui, Espirito Santo, Paraná, Santa Catarina, Mato Grosso and Distrito Federal that is a Federal District.

Because THERE ARE so many states, I (use a capital letter if you are talking about yourself) don’t know one person who has VISITED ALL OF THEM.

I only went TO (The word TO is a direction. For example, “I go TO the store.”) Rio de Janeiro, Espirito Santo, Santa Catarina and Minas Gerais.

Many people think that Brazil is only Carnaval, sex and crime, but it is not. For example, FEW people know what Carnaval is.

MOST people think that Carnaval (use a capital letter for names) is what they watch on television. That there are naked women in Rio de Janeiro.

But, EVERY state in Brazil celebrateS Carnaval like that. In Ouro preto, for example, ARE music shows and people drink beer or caipirinha.

AS FOR the sex, all people CAN have sex if THEY want. Not just here. THERE ARE mEn and women who have no sex before MARRIAGE, and SOME who do.

CRIME is A really big problem here. I think IT is because OF social inequality. Here WE have a lot of poor people. (There must be a subject of the sentence.)

WE have a lot of corruption too. Recently, our GOVERNMENT stole a lot of money in a state company PETROBRAS.

I think the problem is the people BEcause they put this person in a power.

However, WE have a lot of good things here too. For the rich people the life is like in THE United States (the proper name of the country is THE United States. To be correct you must use the word THE) or other developed country.

WE have a lot of trees, beaches, and amazing places.

A good place for you TO visit is Fernando de Noronha, Rio de Janeiro (COPA CABANA, IPANEMA, BARRA DA TIJUCA, CABO FRIO, ARRAIAL DO CABO), Florianópolos, some places in NORDESTE, and others.

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[Practicing my writing] ABOUT BRAZIL

Brazil is a country in South America. It is a big country and has about 200 million of people. Here there are 26 states + 1 federal district. They are: Minas Gerais, São Paulo, Rio de Janeiro, Amazonas, Acre, Tocantins, Rio Grande do Sul, Mato Grosso do Sul, Bahia, Roraima, Rondonia, Amapá, Para, Goias, Maranhão, Ceará, Paraiba, Pernambuco, Alagoas, Sergipe, Piaui, Espirito Santo, Paraná, Santa Catarina, Mato Grosso and Distrito Federal which is a federal district. Because there are so many states, I don't know one person that has visited all these places. I've only been to Rio de Janeiro, Espirito Santo, Santa Catarina and Minas Gerais.
So many people think that Brazil is only Carnaval, sex and stealing, but it isn't. For example, only a few people know what Carnaval is. The Most of people think that Carnaval is only what they've seen on television 'naked women in Rio de Janeiro'. But, every state in Brazil celebrates Carnaval like that. In Ouro Preto, for example, they have music shows and people drink beer or caipirinha. About the sex, all people have sex if they want to. Not just here. We have men and women that don't have sex before getting married, and we have people who do.
Stealing is really a big problem here. I think this is because of social inequality. Here, we have a lot of poor people. We have a lot of corruption too. Recently, our politicians have stolen a lot of money from a state company -PETROBRAS-. I think the problem is the people, because they put this person in a power.
However, we have a lot of good things here too. For the rich people the life is like the life in the United States or other developed countries. We have a lot of trees, beaches, and amazing places. A good place for you visit is Fernando de Noronha, Rio de Janeiro (COPA CABANA, IPANEMA, BARRA DA TIJUCA, CABO FRIO, ARRAIAL DO CABO), Florianópolos, some places in NORDESTE, and others.