Just as sunshine, a dream, just a good
Yesterday,I watchde a old film called a devil wears Prada.
The film told man the actress Andy grow up in job. Though in the end Andy gave up the enviable job ,she also found the first dream .
Sometimes people will lost himself.I hope everybody can find himself .
Just as sunshine, a dream, just a good.
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Just sunshine and a dream. Just good.
Yesterday, I watched an old film called "A Devil Wears Prada."
The film told man the actress Andy grow up in job (?). Although, in the end, Andy gave up the job. He also found his first dream .
Sometimes people will lose themselves. I hope everybody can find themselves.
Just as sunshine, a dream, just a good.
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Just as sunshine, a dream, just as good.
Yesterday, I watched an old film called The Devil Wears Prada.
In the film, the actress playing Andy [grows up in a job](?). Though in the end Andy gave up the enviable job, she also found her dream.
Sometimes people will lose themselves. I hope everybody can find themselves.
Just as sunshine, a dream, just as good.
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One thing you need to work on is pronoun agreement. For example:
People - themselves
Him - himself
You - yourself
Me - myself Etc...
I didn't really understand what you were trying to say for some parts, so just work on making your english more clear.
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