Corrections · 5
What do you think about beauty?
Today I'd like to talk about beauty standards. (especially women)
My hometown, Korea is famous for skinny women.
Most Koreans have been believe that a skinny body is the best one.
If someone seems to gain weight, she feels guilty herself like doing a serious crime.
So, there're just only a few women doing nothing for weight-loss in Korea.
Such a social mood makes lots of women have serious healthy troubles like anorexia.
How about your country? I'd like to know that if is it a common mood all over the world or a unique phenomenon of Korea.
Thanks!
The US also has standards like this, and such helath issues are also a problem. However, we have so much fast-food culture that weight gain is a problem too. It's a good topic to discuss.
What do you think about Beauty?
Today I'd like to take talk about standards of beauty. (especially women)
My hometown*, Korea is famous for skinny women.
Most Koreans have been believeing that a slim skinny body is the best one.
If someone seems to gain weight, she feels guilty (about herself) like doing* a serious crime.
So, there are just a few women *doing nothing for weight-loss in Korea.*
Such a social mood means that makes lots of many women have serious healthy problems trouble like anorexia.
How about your country? I'd like to know if that is it is a common *situation mood all over the world, *or unique phenomenon of Korea.*
Thanks!
* 'country', rather than 'town'
* 'as though she has committed' or just 'of' : i.e. 'she feels guilty of a serious crime'
* . . women in Korea not doing anything to lose weight
* situation, condition, problem, phenomenon
* or a phenomenon unique to Korea
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
