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What do you think about beauty? Today I'd like to take about beauty standard. (especially women) My hometown, Korea is famous for skinny women. Most Korean have been believing skinny body is the best one. If someone seems to gain weight, she feels guilty herself like doing a serious crime. So, there're just few women doing nothing for weight-loss in Korea. Such a social mood makes lots of women have serious healthy trouble like anorexia. How about your country? I'd like to know that is it a common mood all over the world or unique phenomenon of Korea. Thanks!

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What do you think about beauty?

Today I'd like to talk about beauty standards. (especially women)

My hometown, Korea is famous for skinny women.

Most Koreans have been believe that a skinny body is the best one.

If someone seems to gain weight, she feels guilty herself like doing a serious crime.

So, there're just only a few women doing nothing for weight-loss in Korea.

Such a social mood makes lots of women have serious healthy troubles like anorexia.

How about your country? I'd like to know that  if is it a common mood all over the world or a unique phenomenon of Korea.

Thanks!

 

The US also has standards like this, and such helath issues are also a problem. However, we have so much fast-food culture that weight gain is a problem too. It's a good topic to discuss.

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What do you think about Beauty?

Today I'd like to take talk about standards of beauty. (especially women)

My hometown*, Korea is famous for skinny women.

Most Koreans have been believeing that a slim skinny body is the best one.

If someone seems to gain weight, she feels guilty (about herself) like doing* a serious crime.

So, there are just a few women *doing nothing for weight-loss in Korea.*

Such a social mood means that makes lots of many women have serious healthy problems trouble like anorexia.

How about your country? I'd like to know if that is it is a common *situation mood all over the world, *or unique phenomenon of Korea.* 

Thanks!

 

* 'country', rather than 'town'

* 'as though she has committed'  or just 'of' :  i.e. 'she feels guilty of a serious crime'

*  . . women in Korea not doing anything to lose weight

* situation, condition, problem, phenomenon

* or a phenomenon unique to Korea

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