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Air Pollution The air pollution is a big problem nowdays because it implies that the air that we need to live will be no longer breathble. We will be more likely to have lung cancer if this problem continues. The air pollution is not only related with air but alse with water, the water will be as polluted as the air so we won't be able to drink it. The main sources of pollution are the cars and factories which uses a lot of fossil energy and in the process, create smog and pollution. In order to solve this problem, we can think about two solutions. The main solution is to use less fossil fuels and start to use clean energy. The fossil fuels make a lot of pullution because it's needed to burn them in order to produce energy. As a result the air become polluted by the smog produced in this process.Clean energy instead, doesn't pollute at all. New ways of creating clean energy are developed by the science and engineering. The clean energy is cheaper, more powerful and of course cleaner. In addition we have the secondary solution which is a complement for the main solution. We must start using more public transport instead of your own car. it's not a secret that the private transport is not going to be the solution even if the car used clean energy, the problem is that there are going to be too many cars that we wouldn't be able to build new roads without damage the enviroment, we'd need to cut down too many trees that the forests would be very rundown. Using public transport instead is the best thing we can do be cause it uses less energy and we don't damage the enviroment. To sum up, we must start using less gasoline, more clean electricity and leave our car in home and take the public transport.

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Air Pollution

The air pollution is a big problem these days because it implies that the air that we need to live will be no longer breathable. We will be more likely to have lung cancer if this problem continues. The air pollution is not only related with air but alse with water, the water will be as polluted as the air so we won't be able to drink it. The main sources of pollution are the cars and factories which use a lot of fossil fuels, and in the process create smog and pollution.

In order to solve this problem, we can think about two solutions. The main solution is to use less fossil fuels and start to use clean energy. Fossil fuels make a lot of pullution because they need to be burned in order to produce energy. As a result the air becomes polluted by the smog produced in this process. On the other hand, clean energy doesn't pollute at all. New ways of creating clean energy are being developed by science and engineering. The clean energy is cheaper, more powerful, and of course cleaner. In addition we have the secondary solution, which is a complement for the main solution. We must start using more public transportation instead of our own cars. It's not a secret that private transportation is not going to be the solution even if cars use clean energy. The problem is that there are going to be so many cars that we wouldn't be able to build new roads without damaging the enviroment, we'd need to cut down too many trees that the forests would be very rundown. Using public transport instead is the best thing we can do be cause it uses less energy and we don't damage the enviroment. To sum up, we must start using less gasoline, more clean electricity and leave our car at home and take the public transport.

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