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+ Today is a sad day for most Korean. Exactly 1 year ago, a ship with about 300 passengers, most of which are high school students, sinked under the water. Most of them died. Koreans were sad and got angered since the naval police didn't work very well. They were slow. They first saved the captain and crews of the boat. They saved the student later. Slowly. They kept private scuber divers who tried to save passengers.
Today, our president went to South America, without visiting the 1 anniversary for the sad dead. We didn't do well on the election for sure.
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Lesson summary 1
+ Today is a sad day in Korea. Exactly one year ago, a ship with about 300 passengers, most of which were high school students, sank. Most of them died. Many Koreans were sad and angry because the naval police didn't work very well. They were slow. They saved the captain and the crew of the boat first. Then, they attempted to rescue the student. But they were too slow. They kept private scuber divers who tried to save passengers.
Today, our president went to South America, without attending the 1st anniversary for the victims. We didn't do well on the election for sure.
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+ Today is a sad day for most (can omit 'most') Koreans. Exactly one year ago, a ship with about 300 passengers, most of which are whom were high school students, sinked under sank beneath the water/capsized (actually 'beneath the water' is unnecessary, since 'sink' implies it). Most of them the passengers died/drowned. ('them' refers to students but the subject of the previous sentence was 'ship') Koreans were saddened and got angered, since the naval police/coast guard didn't work carry out the rescue very well. They were slow. They first saved the captain and crew (crew is collective, doesn't need plural) of the boat. They only saved/rescued the students later. And too slowly. They kept private scuba divers who tried to save passengers.
Today, our president went to South America, without visiting observing/commemorating the first anniversary for the sad dead. We didn't do well on the election in electing this government for sure.
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Lesson summary 1
+ Today is a sad day for most Korean people. Exactly 1 year ago, a ship with about 300 passengers, most of which are high school students, sank. Most of them died. Koreans were sad and got angered since the naval police didn't work very well. They were slow. They first saved the captain and crews of the boat. They saved the students later. Slowly. They kept private scuber divers who tried to save passengers.
Today, our president went to South America, without visiting the 1st anniversary for the sad dead. We didn't do well on the election for sure.
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