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it is a happy spring day early in the morning , i got up at 6 a.m and made up for the dancing show later After the long time rehearsal, it is time to show up ! i was so excited and nervous of course, fortunately we are a excellent team . Confidence has to beat the fear! when the music is on , i took a deep breath and became extremely calm down. we enjoyed the dancing so much! when its over , i was kinda reluctant to leave. its an amazing experience!

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It is a happy spring day

Early in the morning, I got up at 6 a.m and got ready for the dance show happening later.
After the long rehearsal, it was time for the show!
Of course, I was so excited and nervous. Fortunately, we are an excellent team. Confidence has to beat the fear!
When the music was on, I took a deep breath and became extremely calm. We enjoyed the dancing so much!
When it was over, I was kind of reluctant to leave. It was an amazing experience!

 

Good job with the writing! Just be careful with the verb tense (if you use the past tense to talk about a story, you have to keep using it). 

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it is a happy spring day.

Early in the morning, I got up at 6 a.m and made up Put on makeup for the dancing show later. 
After the long time rehearsal, it was time to show up for the show!
I was so excited and nervous of course, fortunately we are an excellent team. Confidence has to beat the fear!
When the music was on, I took a deep breath and became extremely calm down. We enjoyed the dancing so much!
When it was over, I was kinda reluctant to leave. It was an amazing experience!

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