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I like to do exercise. Most of all i like to watch the videos about skate boarding. Skate boarding is exciting sports. If you want to ride skate board, first you have to buy a beginner's skate board. And then, you have to watch the tutorial about standing on skate board on the internet. Lastly, Practice. again and again. If you want to learn more trick, you should be able to jump. If you can't jump, don't try it.

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I like to do exercise.

Most of all i like to watch the videos about skate boarding.
Skate boarding is an exciting sport.
If you want to ride a skate board, first you have to buy a beginner's skate board.
And then, you have to watch the tutorial about standing on a skate board on the internet.
Lastly, Practice. again and again.
If you want to learn more tricks, you should learn to jump.
If you can't jump, don't try it.

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I like to do exercise.

Most of all I like to watch the videos about skate boarding.
Skate boarding is an exciting sports.
If you want to ride a skate board, first you have to buy a beginner's skate board.
And then, you have to watch the tutorial about standing on a skate board on the internet.
Lastly, Practice. Again and again.
If you want to learn more tricks, you should be try to jump.
If you can't jump, don't try it.

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Nice story!! I think this sentence "Lastly, Practice. again and again." I think you can change to "Practicing is the final step you must do //or// Lastly, learn how to do it then practice, practice, and practice"

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