A day of my vacation

I get up at the 10:30am, I come to kitchen to breakfast, when I finish breakfast I go to revisit my mail in my ipad and I watch television in my room, until 3:00 o'clock is when I come to lunch and return to my room to studying english in my computer using rosetta stone, duolingo and italki. In the afternoon I work in a solar boiler in my house in the rooftop until they are at 9:30 pm and is when I bathe for dinner and sleep

A typical day of my vacation.

I get up at 10:30am and go to the kitchen to have breakfast. After finishing breakfast I check email on my Ipad, and watch television in my room until three o'clock. At that time, I go to have lunch and then return to my room to study English on my computer using Rosetta Stone, Duolingo and Italki. Later in the afternoon, I work in a solar boiler on the rooftop of my house until it is 9:30pm. Then I bathe, have dinner, and go to sleep.

Hi Daniel - My name is Sean and I am an English teacher from Toronto, Canada. I enjoyed reading your paragraph, and have rewritten it for you. Please study the corrections carefully. Also, I wasn't sure what you meant when you wrote: "I work in a solar boiler".

Anyway, good luck with your English studies. If you ever want to work on your English speaking or pronunciation, I would be happy to give you some help! All the best, Sean

A day of my vacation "A day in the life of me."

I get up at the 10:30am, I come "go" to kitchen to breakfast, when I finish breakfast I go to revisit "read"  my mail in on my ipad and I watch television in my room, until 3:00 o'clock is when I come " I go" to lunch and return to my room to studying english in "on" my computer using rosetta stone, duolingo and italki. In the afternoon I work in a solar boiler in my house in the rooftop until they are at 9:30 pm and is when I bathe for dinner and sleep

*I was not sure what a solar boiler is exactly, so I was unsure for the last sentence.